Reviews for As the World Falls Down
Warfang chapter 12 . 7/15/2015
Oh heavens.

It's nice that Nero survived, but Dante. Dante your demonic courting is getting out of hand. Oh, this could only end well. .
Warfang chapter 11 . 7/15/2015
Oh thank heavens, Nero just might make it through this alive.

Yay for Dante killing the nameless insectoid.
I bet dragging Nero back through the tunnel will be fantastic.
And a hollow tree? Where did the demon get that idea from? But it was ingenious all the same.

And ugh, okay, I am going to have a few ick thoughts on parasites now. You did a wonderful job with your writing in those scenes. (shudders)
Warfang chapter 9 . 7/15/2015
Oh.
Oh dear.
That is not good.
Warfang chapter 4 . 7/15/2015
Uh oh! Nero's in a bad situation now. (And I really hope he isn't tired from the parasite coming back.)

But how are they going to move forward from here? I suppose I'll have to read on to find out. .
Warfang chapter 2 . 7/15/2015
Oh dear. I do wonder what will happen in the coming chapters, as Dante realizes just how bad of a situation he's in. And I wonder if Nero's demon will ever pick up on the fact it's being courted? I wonder if it would recognize demonic courting, after being in Fortuna.
Mareonet chapter 13 . 8/1/2013
Nothing to be awkward about. Enjoyed every minute.
Mareonet chapter 10 . 8/1/2013
So glad I'm not the only one who uses —LOVES— parasites in DMC fanfiction. I use them in Nero and Dante (or Vergil) situations quite often, myself.

...If only I could overcome my DAMNED writer's block...

Greatly enjoying this.
Mareonet chapter 8 . 8/1/2013
Handled very well. I do approve of this technique.
Mareonet chapter 2 . 8/1/2013
FINALLY, someone USED the "impress the mate" technique! It's common sense! I've never seen that before, and executed well. Fucking hell...

...Probably the best way to make realistically Dante "depressed" in this situation.
Demonic Device chapter 13 . 8/12/2012
That bonus chapter was awesomesauce and filled me with warm fuzzies, haha. Thank you for sharing, and I shall happily read your other stories now. :D
Demonic Device chapter 6 . 8/12/2012
Okay, yay, definitely found the right story. -nods- Just making surr, haha.
It's hot, fer sure. ouo
-goes back to lapping up the rest of the story- ;]
Demonic Device chapter 5 . 8/12/2012
Omaigawd, I've been looking for this story for forever, and I'm so glad I finally found it again! I really, really, REALLY love it. :) Even if you say the idea is unoriginal, it's still awesome enough for me to have remembered it enough to look for it :D
NinetailFoxme9 chapter 13 . 6/20/2012
BAHAHH Nero sneezed on Dante, that right there epic alone hehe

This story was goddamn AWESOME

I admire u talent to the max, your style of writing is just amazing/inspiring

Meh loved it SO much

OMG

this is a sequel to another story right, I've read it and Loved it to the max also...and if not this is extremely awkward for me :) heheh so hopefully it is ur story and im not stupid

BUT YEAH

EPIC nero x dante fic ;3
Doryan chapter 13 . 12/29/2011
I love it!
Rusty chapter 13 . 11/27/2011
I've just read it from beginning to finish and omg : I loved the entire thing entirely like wholly! I wanted to eat my screen! Its half 4 in the morning and I'm typing this! But seriously... That was gooooooood.
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