|Reviews for Persona: Defiance of Fate|
| carlosraruto chapter 3 . 12/20/2011
Im glad that you are back shark, The chapter was great but you had good reasons to make us wait so it would be cruel to use the hiatus as a critic for the chapter.
Also, will Minato communicate with his siter with letters or phone calls? (wait... now I wonder if the Kirijo group would check minatos mail) Im just curious.
Keep up the good work and until the next update.
| Ashleythetiger chapter 3 . 12/20/2011
more answers adds more Qs
whats the letter about?
that sword, the gunshot wound?
well await more chaps
| Vitrify chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Great to see an update from you.
Was it worth the wait? To be honest, I found the developments in this chapter to be somewhat bland, not to be putting you off or anything.
That said, I'm definitely still looking forward to seeing more from you. Your fic definitely has potential.
| Reis Nailo chapter 3 . 12/20/2011
Hey, great to see you back in action.
No electricity at all? You don't have to give me details, but what the heck? Then again, I've been pretty on the ropes myself. In the past year I've moved FOUR times, I know how it can be. I've only just gotten internet access back myself. So I'll be working on Wolves of War again, not to mention Knight of Revolution 2nd Advent.
I found Minato's interactions with Pixie to be a fantastic twist compared to all other Persona fics out there. It'll be interesting which other Personas you make him interact with since covering everyone of them would be a task of near impossible odds.
You did place a Shinji/Minako pairing for this one so I will be eager to see how you introduce the female protagonist from P3P. I always felt that the whole Mitsuru/Minato suited the story more than Yukari, just from the whole way he's portrayed even with the player influencing certain Social Link Progressions.
Send me a PM whenever you get the opportunity. I've got some things to discuss about Gundam Seed: Wolves of War with you concerning The Gray Demons and Kenneth DiFalco.
Love the length of the chapter and look forward to the next update.
Here's to getting back into the works! See you around comrade.
| Arcananox chapter 3 . 12/19/2011
"Was it worth the wait?"
Absolutely, my friend! Absolutely! Very brilliant!
TANSTAAFL There Are No Such Things As A Free Lunch, am I correct?
| Emperor Lelouch Lamperouge chapter 3 . 12/19/2011
"I swear, he must guzzle energy drinks the way an alcoholic does beer."
I see what you did there.
| End chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
This fic looks very promising. I'll be sure to read the next chapter and give a better review then.
| John.K-pRc chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
i hope you still working at this story, i want to see minato/mitsuru to be together.
| Satoa chapter 2 . 9/18/2011
I don't have much to compare it with, but your characterization of Minato is pretty refreshing. While I'm not too fussed about pairings, I'll be looking forward to see how you approach a Minato/Mitsuru pairing.
That said, I continue to be intrigued by your story - keep on writing man.
| Satoa chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
This has definitely piqued my interest. I've read a bit of the manga, but it was a bit too confusing without prior knowledge from the games. While I was interested in Persona's world, it was a bit hard to continue with the manga, so I dabbed into fanfiction - and this story was exactly what I was looking for.
| Lin.B'Cry chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
waiting for the next chapter :')
| hignum chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
I love the way you characterize Mitsuru and Minato! They are perfect! There is one thing though, I never though Minato was one to curse very often but the surprising factor was not that!
Relating him to Naoto Shirogane from Persona 4, now THAT was very surprising! Well, that and because they both have blue hair and look cute! Xp
I hope to see chapter 3 in the near future, just don't kill me by dropping the story short, a lot of authors do that and it's the worst when the story is really good... '
| Isaac chapter 2 . 6/21/2011
Man, this is gonna be a big story.
I like the chapter lengths. And I like the story so far.
Keep em coming:).
| Ligare chapter 2 . 6/18/2011
I wonder why Megami Tensei series are generating so many novelization. Counting yours, there are at least five readable P3's word-smithing in . Worry not, though, none of them are identical with to yours.
Guiding Light is quite good, but it has been a long time since its last update. I hope it's not actually abandoned. Fairly English Story (currently being rewritten) is exciting, but I have always wanted to tied that version of Minato with titanium alloy rope, weight him down with several tons of solid granite and dump him down the Mariana Trench.
Even without deadlines and monetary rewards please be consistent with your update, your readers will thank you.
| JackFrost14 chapter 2 . 6/9/2011