|Reviews for Persona: Defiance of Fate|
| SeigZeon chapter 2 . 6/3/2011
this a great story can can't wait for the next one XD. also like my last review will naoto come into play in your story?
| SeigZeon chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
well this is awsome i must say also like how you put naoto into the plot i wonder will she come later?
| messiahthanatos chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
love it. why couldn't this have been the actual game, would have been more entertaining.
| personaddict07 chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
like your story and the way its going.
please keep it up. acnt wait for whats gonna happen next.
| neko-neko-aishizu chapter 2 . 5/2/2011
Just coming back to the Persona section here and was very glad to have found this story. Finally; something that is unique, makes me contemplate more than the game offered and is most importantly not regurgitated game-script. The fact that it is grammatically correct and coupled with excellent spelling doesn't hurt.
| SpecialAgentOrange chapter 2 . 4/26/2011
Reading through both chapters I have to say I'm enjoying the story so far; I mostly like the thought and detail you've put into this. Reminds me of an earlier fic from a few years back.
There were some sections in your two installments that made me pause; mostly it had to do with the background you have in mind for Minato, and the same towards Mitsuru and the Kirijo Group. It was enough to start asking questions, but not enough to make me stop reading.
Regarding the pairing, I can respect it; I mean, Mitsuru strikes me more as the love interest that you - the player - would choose as opposed to the character. As much as i enjoy the charm that followed the Minato X Yukari pairing, there are other people that the writers in this community need to come together to discuss - if not construct such projects - but now I'm getting off-course in this tangent.
I'm liking the pace and set-up you have for those two; with them both trying to pry some hidden truth from one another, there will certainly be an amusing sub-plot to the story. On one hand, we probably know what secrets Mitsuru's hiding - though you may surprise us - yet we have very little clue as to the backstory you've constructed Minato. Suppose that gives us a reason to root for her. On an off topic, part of me wonders if you're planning to fuse SMT mythos to your novelization.
Apart from generalized thoughts about the story, I can only give you complements on your characterizing and style of writing. Looking forward to your next installment.
| Arcananox chapter 2 . 4/26/2011
This is starting to get really interesting. The fact that Mitsuru questioned Minato's last name 'Arisato' makes me wonder if it's going to be revealed to be Shirogane. Please update soon.
| Ominae chapter 2 . 4/26/2011
I've actually read this, but I didn't do the review since I was really lazy and that I was doing Resident Evil fanfics to wind up my writing. So here you are.
Nice to see you do something different for a change while I love reading your Gundam-based stories. Also good to see something different for a change.
| hagane-girl chapter 2 . 4/15/2011
finally, a minato/mitsuru fic that is a really good attempt at novelizing the game. I've been looking for good ones for ages, and haven't found any, until now. Keep up the good work.
| Spiritblade chapter 2 . 4/10/2011
You're on my to-watch list, Solid Shark. This is an excellent - and very, very daring - attempt at novelizing the game. I'm with you all the way.
| XoreandoX chapter 2 . 4/10/2011
Been waiting for this story to update for so long, more over because I love your writing structure and your correct use of grammar and words. It also helps that you give insight on your own development of certain characters and try to stray away from repeating scenes directly from the game. In terms of the pairing between Minato and Mitsuru, I am in whole agreement that this pairing isn't seen as often, and look forward to seeing how you continue to write their relationship; though I am curious as to what Naoto will say about his newfound mystery, and whether I'll see Minato alive at the end of this adventure. Still it's a curiosity that I can put on hold until I see this story through until the end, so until you update again, may you continue to have many great new inspirations, and continue to write well.
| AtheyChan chapter 2 . 4/9/2011
I love you and I love this story. Minato and Mitsuru definitely need more love out there. I'll be keeping an eye out for updates. Keep up the amazing writing.
| TsubasaWitch chapter 2 . 4/8/2011
:D That was worth the two month wait! I love this story so much right now Minato reminded so much of Naoto. At alot of points, you can see how they are related really.
Lol loved how he wanted to kill junpei several times. It was funny, next to the horror the he and yukari had when he joined SEES. I have to say though I think that I did.
Some of the foreshadowing that you were refering to at the end. The name of his sword I love it! That being the name of his persona's wife.
Take your time with writting everything out with the way. I can wait, for each chapter I look forward. To your next update I'll be reading this all the way till the end!
| Axel yamamoto chapter 2 . 4/8/2011
I-i dont know i should cry or what, this is awesome! a long chapter, with detail and a secret past to boot! man...and i must praise you greatly of many idea you're putting in this story, also, Minato seem have to have a bad past about a girl...i like it when the main character past is hidden and told bit, by bit, each chapter. So, please continue this, and update soon! and im sorry if i ofend you or something.
| Hybrix chapter 2 . 4/7/2011
this chapter is good! kudos for you! :D