|Reviews for Persona: Defiance of Fate|
| Storm Wolf77415 chapter 2 . 4/7/2011
Very nice update, Comrade. And a nice name for Minato's blade.
| carlosraruto chapter 2 . 4/7/2011
Got to love the sarcastic thoughs of Minato, I was surprised of the fact that kenjis first appearance was omitted still I couldn't agree more with Minatos opininon about it.
As whit the first chapter I enjojed the scenes whit the other characters you add they, help to fill missed scenes. Also Minatos backstory seems prety interesting, cant wait to find out about it.
finally, Thanks for aswering my question and you are right there is not enough Minato/Mitsuru out there and yours is definetly the best until now.
Keep up the good work and until next chapter.
| Hybrix chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
great chapter good job! :D
| carlosraruto chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
You did a great job with this story, you keep a good balance between faithfulness to the game and your own handywork.
Also the main cast seems to be in characters and minato is portrayed nicely.
About the fan theory, I dont really mind it and allows minato to have more topics to think of.
So a thumb up for this chapter¡.
But one question. (You dont have to answer if you dont want) Will this be Minato x Mitsuru?, if its not I will keep reading anyway but is good to know.
Until next Chapter.
| TsubasaWitch chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
This is the most interesting written version of Persona 3 that I've ever. Come across but, so far I really like it there's its own uniqe. Style to it there those it follows the game lines. It feels like something completey on its own level.
I look foward, to the nexy chapter I'll be keeping an eye out from now on. You're going for a different ending to the game. :D Sweet! I can't wait to see what you do!
Oh you made Naoto and Minato, related neat those two do look way too much. Alike for there not a to be a connection update when you can!
| IgnisHeart chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Don't understand half of what you said but I like your story. I've enjoyed Persona 3 as well and hated the ending for doing that to for Minato. That said, I can't wait to see what you do with the story. From what I've seen however, Minato is rather intellegent and physically fit if his use of a sword is any indication. Plus because of his home life, he is able to find information when needed. Kind of got the impression of a fusion of both Lelouch and Suzaku from Code Geass. That said, update soon as I'd like to see where you go with this.
| Mr-Goomba chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
I can see hints of Suzumiya
I'm definitely liking this version of Minato, and love the amount of detail you've put into this. I'm definitely going to keep an eye out for updates.
Best of luck to you on your progress.
| Grey Soul chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Great chapter. There has always been a lack of long stories follow this game. I remember a story like this one before, a pity that it has been appearantly discontinued. Your version of Minato in this is interesting; with this change in his personality, I look forward to Social Links, a great part of the game, entertaining too.
I wish you good luck.
| XoreandoX chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Very interested in the coming chapters, considering your take on a more puzzle solving Minato, which would make more sense if you were to have him go through social links objectively; then again the personality would also be interesting to watch overall even if he doesn't look at social links that way. Look forward to the coming chapters and wish you luck on producing the Novelization you wish.
| Droplet of Sour chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
This is something that has my support. Godspeed, and let me know if you need someone to assist on finer details.
| Vivi239 chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
I always look forward to seeing video game novelizations, the fan perspectives they give always make it so much more interesting, and this one is certainly no exception. I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter.
| Implying Implications chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
This story made my day. I started working on a Persona novelization of my own two days ago (only 4, not 3), so you can imagine my happiness when someone else is writing one for similar reasons. About time for a novelization that doesn't change the plot of the games (other than your ending, of course), nor adds new main characters (hopefully). Your version of Minato, and his connection with Naoto, is extremely interesting- In fact, your presentation of all the characters is amazing. I'll be patiently awaiting chapter 2!
| knightblazer85 chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
well if anybody can pull off a persona 3 fic and keep minato a live it'll be you.
a few years back i was talking to somebody about a persona 3 fic and the only thing i could come up with to keep minato alive is something similar to how Izanagi-no-Ookami was formed in persona 4.
the unison of the bonds minato forged through the social links combining with the World/Universe Arcana to create a lock to seal Nyx away. resulting in Minato losing the ability to summon his persona
| Vandenbz chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
I'm definitely enjoying your version of Minato in this fic, faithful to the game yet with a distinct personality of his own. His relation to Naoto certainly shows, he deduces and reasons, not immediately freaking out when things don't make apparent sense. Awesome depiction of his skill with a sword during that fight with the shadows, the clues hinting at his prowess were planted well throughout the chapter. The other characters are also well-done, looking forward to more exposition as time goes on. Are you going to aim for social links with girls the same way Persona 4 went about it, able to choose being just friends with one self-chosen love interest? The fact that you have to actually date every girl in Persona 3 in order to get all the Social Links did annoy me, I'm grateful Persona 4 fixed that problem. I'm also glad you're aiming for a more positive ending, the canon ending is definitely depressing. It's going to be a wild ride so please keep up the great work!