|Reviews for The Tin Man|
| lowi chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
"Meh, not too fantastic." you got to be kidding! It WAS fantastic, I swear!
By the way, feels like I'm stalking you, but your stories ARE amazing, and I have to read them and tell you, just have to... :)
| pyr0technic chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
:) wow this is really good
| thenewkait chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
| allisonarrgent chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Aww, I really liked this, fiance!
You know I'm a sucker for Rose/Scorpius, first of all. ;)
And your words were quite lovely, you know that? Don't you dare say that this isn't a good freeverse, because IT IS.
"you're lonelyandsadandbroken / he's lostandgoneandunfixable"
"but his armour is rusty / and his heart is a / e"
Keep writing, man! :)
| kingslayers chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
RoseScorp! And freeverse! I LOVE
| fabricated fantasies chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
This was G-O-R-G-E-O-U-S, Drishti dear. I love the whole Tin Man metaphor, and the covering up sadness and loneliness with studies.
Because of it's length, it is a tad confusing about the whole "plot" of the story; I'm not really sure what's going on: why Rose is lonely, why Scorpius is the knight.
However, the poetry of the freeverse is lovely, and you sort of forget about the need for a plot.
This line love
"you only get to believe in magic once, right, love?"
Great job, Drishti!
| BlueEyes444 chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
That was amazing. :D
| Just the Wind chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
So bloody fantastic that I feel the need to use British curse words to describe it.
Seriously, dear, I love this. And it completely resonates with me, covering up loneliness through studies. Just love. Freakin' perfect.