Reviews for The Tin Man
lowi chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
"Meh, not too fantastic." you got to be kidding! It WAS fantastic, I swear!

By the way, feels like I'm stalking you, but your stories ARE amazing, and I have to read them and tell you, just have to... :)
pyr0technic chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
:) wow this is really good
thenewkait chapter 1 . 3/6/2011

allisonarrgent chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Aww, I really liked this, fiance!

You know I'm a sucker for Rose/Scorpius, first of all. ;)

And your words were quite lovely, you know that? Don't you dare say that this isn't a good freeverse, because IT IS.

Favorite lines:

"you're lonelyandsadandbroken / he's lostandgoneandunfixable"

"but his armour is rusty / and his heart is a / e"

Keep writing, man! :)
kingslayers chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
RoseScorp! And freeverse! I LOVE
fabricated fantasies chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
This was G-O-R-G-E-O-U-S, Drishti dear. I love the whole Tin Man metaphor, and the covering up sadness and loneliness with studies.

Because of it's length, it is a tad confusing about the whole "plot" of the story; I'm not really sure what's going on: why Rose is lonely, why Scorpius is the knight.

However, the poetry of the freeverse is lovely, and you sort of forget about the need for a plot.

This line love

"you only get to believe in magic once, right, love?"

Great job, Drishti!
BlueEyes444 chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
That was amazing. :D
Just the Wind chapter 1 . 2/17/2011

So bloody fantastic that I feel the need to use British curse words to describe it.

Seriously, dear, I love this. And it completely resonates with me, covering up loneliness through studies. Just love. Freakin' perfect.