|Reviews for Rabbit Heart|
| dbpbatm chapter 26 . 1/12
| Guest chapter 26 . 10/6/2013
I enjoyed reading this story..thank you very much!
| I'M SORRY chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
With all this plagiarizing thing going on, I want to make a confession. I stole a paragraph from this fic for a one-shot back when I was just starting to write and my English was lacking. I pulled the one-shot a few weeks later, when I found out about plagiarizing, but I still feel bad about it. What I did was wrong, but I'm owning up to my mistake and I am formally apologizing. I'm sorry for what I did and I swear to never do it again. Sincerely, R.
| lenniem chapter 26 . 8/2/2013
Just found your story. Thank you for sharing it with us. I loved this Edward Scrappy and Shaggy !
| LAB1 chapter 25 . 6/9/2013
Adorable story! I really enjoyed reading it!
| jadedghost22 chapter 26 . 4/24/2013
Loved reading this story! I favorite it last night, and could not stop reading it! I am sorry that I missed out on reading it while you were writing it, but I am so happy to see that it was completed so I could read all of it. It was a great story, and I wish there was more to it. I am going to miss reading this story, and I just started reading it. I think you should do an outtake on the wedding. Anyways, hope to read more great stories from you.
| ghartling chapter 26 . 4/15/2013
I was waiting for the complete! I found a post on FB talking about all the stories that were completed, but not marked. So glad I read this in a day! What a great story! Can't wait for more outtakes!
| jterry453 chapter 26 . 3/25/2013
This was so cute! Shy Edward! So dang cute! Ugh! Great fic!
| MinaRivera chapter 26 . 3/1/2013
I think this is the third time I've re-read this fic. I was wondering if you are still thinking of writing that EmPOV when Renee took Bella away... if not, then let me know!
| ttandme69 chapter 26 . 2/27/2013
Great story...loved it. Thanks for posting. What was the secret Edward held over Angela? Loved Shaggy & Scrappy names. Thanks, Lisa
| ttandme69 chapter 18 . 2/27/2013
Alec is the stalker?
| JanuaryLestrange chapter 22 . 2/14/2013
Yay. I guessed before the reveal. :). I'd write more but I want to find out what happens next.
| MyHubbyIsATwilightWidow chapter 26 . 1/21/2013
Loved this story too!
I loved this sweet, shy Edward. I liked how you kept our familiar characters, but not necessarily in the role we expected - Angela as a witch?! James as a best friend who isn't really a backstabbing bad guy?! Tanya as a good friend?!
Thank you for writing and sharing your stories with all of us.
This is not criticism, but there are two things I noticed in the story that jumped out at me as errors - you mentioned putting something in the backseat of Alistair's Corvette. That's impossible. BEHIND the seat maybe, but there is no backseat. Also in the outtake, Mac remembers being best friends with Charlie when they were ten, but I'm pretty sure when Bella finds Charlie's birth certificate in the real story, it's mentioned that he doesn't come to town until he's an adult.
Just thought you might want to change those if you have a chance.
Again, not criticizing, just wanted you to know that those jumped out.
| casullivan247 chapter 26 . 12/30/2012
Great story. Love these two (:
| sherryola chapter 26 . 12/13/2012
I really enjoyed this. You did some great twists, angela as a bitch, James as a good guy and Jane as the stalker. I thought all those things made the story fresh and unique. Love how you ended it too. i'm off to check your profile for more.