Mc suuuuuucks

hmm.. I really want to continue reading this but I'm getting a headache how redundant the mc's actions are, he says that he is aware of what's happening etc. but then his actions before he get forced shows that meh, anyway, good luck.

I would have thought by now this story would have been completed. :( Written so well but it's been too long...

So he is not someone from our world reborn in the KHR world?

Ok, first impression of reading the prologue and the first chapter. I like the OC, I like his personality, I like the way he shouted a greeting to the world, shows he has spunk. In my liking him I'm now invested to see what happens to him. The shooting and subsequent event that ended with the indroduction of the best friend is a nice scene.

I'm really impressed that you gathered many data and make this awesome chapter! Especially at the end! It was a nice twist! Never expected for this kind of revelation! As much as I don't really like the way Vito say all those things, he does has some points. I really don't know how to put it into words regarding this chapter, other than it feels a lot darker and realistic, especially with the mafia traditions, ritual, and all that you added in this chapter. It's not that detailed, but it gave understanding about the depths of the mafia world in real life.

Excellent job! Keep it up! ;D

Amato's behaviour is not really surprising. When people lost someone important, they can act far different from their usual self and even change drastically like certain antagonist (I'm sure you know who). But of course I hope Amato won't be a bad guy! I already half expecting Adele's fate, but it's still shocking to read this and sad... Rest in peace, Adele (TT_TT).

I felt like having a heart attack when reading about the bomb and such. It must be really terrifying if I were in Amato's place, the fear, the worry, and all. It's been a while since I read a character like the bomber. Reading this chapter reminds me of the bombing incident in my town years ago.

Zoe showed more child-like quality in this chapter, which is a good thing. To be honest, in the previous chapter, Zoe acted more...how should I put it, monotone (maybe?), than she is supposed to be as a child even for a genius. I'm glad to see this side of Zoe :)

Good Luck

The chapter really living up to its title. A girl around his age, a girl older than him, and now even a younger girl than him, Amato sure is a magnet for girls, huh. And is it just me, or whenever Amato is with particular girl, he always ends up in a situation where he make sounds of distress almost like Tsuna does? Too bad that Kiera didn't appear much since I like her the best now. But the part when Amato's sketching and showed it to Gina and Alessia afterwards is more than enough :)

I have to agree with your friend thought about Zoe's vocabulary. I think even if she's a genius, she's still a child. No matter how genius she is, an elementary school kid like her should still has a childish, innocent side in her like any other kid around her age does. A genius like her might be stand out among other kids around her age, but that doesn't change the fact that she's still a kid. Zoe being emotional helping her character as a kid, but I don't think that's good enough.

Love this chapter. I'll wait for the next one :D

So fucking many chapters O_O

Somehow, I begin to like Kiera even more than Yoko and Regina... Odd... Though, ever since her first appearance, I find her a likeable character, but I never thought I would come to like her this much.

Good thing that both Kiera and Yoko are okay. What I like the most in this chapter are when Kiera told her story when she fought a bear and when Kirea dropped her politeness and started to use Yoko's name like a friend should be.

I don't think Legacy Arms is a weird name. In fact, I think it's a good name because it's quite unique and easy to remember :D

I was getting nervous when reading the beginning of this chapter, but it turned out fine for both of them in the end. Now I'm confused of what has happened int he previous chapter. Was it an illusion? Or Hayashi just being paranoid? Urgh! I don't understand anymore...! A new Legacy arm, huh. I wonder how they're going to do with it. Amato, appear and take some action already!

Good luck :)

As always. You, with your unbearable and amazing suspense...! I don't think it's bad. When people becoming different from what they are, it's usually pushed by adrenaline or emotion, it's a common thing and makes a good twist for story. Make sure not to overuse it though, or it'll feels cliche. The title predator really fits for this chapter. Kiera... Yoko... I WANNA READ THE NEXT CHAPTER XD

Also, when will the zanna family meet tsuna and the others?

Wait, so Sergio has sky flames?