Reviews for Far, Far Away and Long, Long Ago
Guest chapter 6 . 3/7/2013
lol! Jared the Great saved the day!
Guest chapter 4 . 3/7/2013
omg, your Hephaestion, words can't describe him! handsome, lovely, intelligent, loyal, strong headed, courageous, tough, caring, etc, all in one single pack?! damn he is perfection himself, and too good to ever exist! damn, i love love love him! and you of course!
fabercastel chapter 28 . 11/14/2012
Hi ;) Please update your story. To tell the truth I don't realy care what happens with the two celebrities (don't really know anything about them at all), but I like your Hephaestion in this story soooooo much. I was quite shocked by his last encounter with Alexander, so I am really looking forward to a better turn of events. Please update, I am very curious to know what happens next. I like this story more than all the others you have writen.
Norrsken chapter 5 . 11/3/2012
Dear I'veAbandonedControl,

I like your Gauagamela. It feels like re visiting the Movie, with additional AR aspects. Poor Colin, he is not a Military man. I can feel his terror. Jared adapts in a better way, but during the aftermath Colin helps out in the field hospital spontaneously, while Jared is horrified by all the suffering. He does all right, though when he comforts the dying boy. It is a deeply moving scene.

The culture crash between Future and Ancient time is well brought on in the scene when Hephaestion examines the cell phones and watches. He thinks that Colin and Jared are Gods. No wonder, the situation is a very strange one - but you manage to make it believable.

The story moves on with a fast pace. I appreciate the intrigue with the Persian spies - but it seems that Alexander has a clever plan that will outsmart Darius...

I enjoy the short flashbacks. Poor Jared, his childhood seems complicated.

All the best wishes and many thanks for sharing,

/ NorthernLight
Norrsken chapter 3 . 11/3/2012
Dear I'veAbandonedControl,

Most interesting Time traveling tale. Poor Colin and Jared. I must give them much credit, they are very brave when they try to escape. Bucephalus will not allow them, he has good taste when he wants the handsome strangers to remain in Camp.

The childhood memory is endearing. I can clearly *see* the young boys on their forest adventure. One assumes there is a very dangerous animal in the bushes, then the harmless cat appears. He brings bad luck all the same - but *our* Hephaestion shows his good character and saves his friend.

I like your Jared a lot when he deviously hides Colin's cigarettes. :) I much appreciate your cleverly *hidden* non smoking propaganda! :)

Then we have Darius and Bessus and the Persians looming in the shadows. I am looking much forward to your handling of Gaugamela - but I am not so sure that Colin and Jared will appreciate the *real* violence and action to come...

All the best wishes and eagerly off to next part,

/ NorthernLight
Norrsken chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
Dear I'veAbandonedControl,

I like this AR tale. Poor Colin and jared. They certainly have managed to come Far, Far Away and also very Long, Long Ago. The title is well chosen and enticing, like an old time fairy tale. I will be back with more R&Rs soon, the beginning is quite enticing and intriguing.

All the best wishes and many thanks for sharing,

/ NorthernLight
violetsuki chapter 28 . 11/1/2012
Please, could you finish this story? Please, please, please ! As PhaiFan, I hope to read Colin and Jared get together.
13Annie chapter 28 . 8/21/2012
It was a very good chapter, Hephaistion, the bread, Ptolemy's hand nasty, and then Hephaistion slurps it up, you had me in stitches.

Colin and Jared, it's time to get it on, please, pretty please.

If I may be so bold as to ask: please don't break Alexander and Hephaistion up, they are so good together.

Hope to be reading more, soon :)

Annie.
Geli chapter 27 . 8/9/2012
I really do not mind M-scenes , but I think I do not need any tackiness, as written in the last sentence !
That's a porn, only .
lex chapter 27 . 2/29/2012
Youre doing it again, love, going dead on us! Why! You said wil soon have colin stick it in jareds ass! Stil waiting! Stil waiting for alex's pov and him making it up to phai for raping him, you have a knack for violence, but you canmake it beautiful between them. Pls update your other two stories, i love them. Pls dnt let me grow old waiting for updates!
lex chapter 27 . 2/29/2012
Youre doing it again, love, going dead on us! Why! You said wil soon have colin stick it in jareds ass! Stil waiting! Stil waiting for alex's pov and him making it up to phai for raping him, you have a knack for violence, but you make it beautiful between them. Pls update your other two stories, i love them. Pls dnt let me grow old waiting for updates!
lex chapter 27 . 1/28/2012
Finaly, an update! I Was starting to despair! Am reading this curled up in bed, perfect way to end my day! Happy to see a phai and alex sex scene! Just wish alex didnt have to force phai, they're supposed to make sweet love! Please make it tender next time, poor phai needs lots of TLC he's suffered enough. Can we get alex's POV, am dying to know what he thinks about phai. Does he still just want to kill him? MAKE HIM LOVE HIM! Can't wait for collin and jared love scene make it sweet and hot!
ZRaye chapter 27 . 1/28/2012
WOW...so glad to see the update! This was REALLY good! I can't WAIT for Chapter 28! I hope it is VERY SOON! This is like reading 2 stories at once!
frapanappy chapter 27 . 1/28/2012
Good story
Yumemakura chapter 27 . 1/28/2012
I'm glad to see this new chapter. I was just wondering when you are going to update this story. To tell the truth, I cannot get enough of your 'Gods world'. It is dark, violent, and filled with angst, but something there grips my heart.

Jun
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