Reviews for Dusk and Dawn
Jetzul chapter 3 . 9/18/2011
YAAAAAAYYY! Franticshipping, or whatever it's called! Great beginning! Can't wait for more!
dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
This is a good story. Please continue. Dawn and Lucas forever.
iAD chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
anonimous chapter 2 . 2/21/2011
HIII¡ Your fic is great for having a good time and have about 50 chapters, ufff... It will be very long, continues to publish more often and it will be better, pleaseee?. On the other hand, I like the couple LucasxDawn (in this case: DuskxDawn), this is my fav couple; I read many stories about them, I wonder when they star dating... Im impatient.

Well byeee¡ see you later¡
FreezeHaxz chapter 2 . 2/20/2011
In the battle you should use more techniques instead of just running recklessly into battle. Use the enviroment around them to use in battle like Piplup could have used the lake to help in his battle. Don't worry you will get better as you write more.
rosesword chapter 2 . 2/19/2011
cant wait 4 more xv
FreezeHaxz chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
This was good chapter to start the fanfiction.

Why did you decided to change Lucas name to Dusk?

Well keep up the good work.