Reviews for The Bird and the Tarantula |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm very much enjoying this story. The interaction between the Young Justice team is great (including Red Arrow), and I really like the Batman/Robin interaction as well. I don't know as Batman realized what Robin had planned, and I don't think he'd be happy about it. I'm excited to find out what will happen next. |
![]() ![]() Sooo glad to see you update this story! I love the way you describe Robin and all the other characters. Looking forward to the next part ;) Hob x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great plot, well-written, and great interaction between the characters, especially between Robin and Wally with their years-long friendship and all. :) Rocky road all the way! I wouldn't worry about the OC at all; from what I've seen people don't bother dissing OC villains, just OC heroes/support characters (mostly because, yeah, they do tend to steal the limelight from our beloved favorite characters). Villains though, ah, we love to hate a good, fresh, new villain! The more villains we have, the more tail for our heroes to kick! Again, good job and keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This is getting seriously good can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yayyy! I like cool bad-guys! Well, adding on the fact that I recently read your fic, Papercut, and I loved your OCs there, I love Mr. blondie as well ;) The chapter was awesome, and offered insight on what's going to happen! I'm sorry to hear that you had to re-write it 3 times, though! I'm curious to see what the rest of the team will come up with as a plan, and whether or not they will fail. (Although, judging from the 'enemy's' confidence, I'm kinda doubting that...XP) (p.s. I love the OC names you use. How do you think of them?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() DUDE! OH THE COMPLETE HORROR! DUDE! UPDATE! I'M ON THE EDGE OF MY CHAIR! PLEASE! UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW AMAZING |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very awesome chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! an update! I was begining to worry a bit lol. I'm not going to lie, but I get a creepy feeling from Kriz. Hopefully Robing will get help soon. I wonder what will happen when the team gets there? Great chapter! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, an update! Its really good. Cant wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah! So, what exactly makes robin so specieal to this guy? Yes, he's awesome. |
![]() ![]() OMG! I'm so happy right now! *does a twirl* I had been eagerly awaiting the update! (You meanie left us on such a clif hanger JK _-) This has seriously been on my mind every day. And now I come home from work, turn on my computer to find you updated! *squeal* I am going to read this now. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story, and possibly the best YJ story I've ever read. You made my favorites list after chapter one. Plus, it kept me on the edge of my seat way past my bedtime! :) Hope you update soon, because I seriously can't wait. I hate cliffies. But in any case, thanks for sharing your wonderful work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alright, your boss dude is officially more terrifying than the Joker. (Well done) |