|Reviews for Elements Angel and Evil|
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/23/2013
Damn it ! I love Nagihiko! Can't you just give me my Nagi! *pout* Great, now I sound like a prat
| Angela Annette Dixon chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Cool I like the story
| TheDishThatRanAwayWithTheSpoon chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
| WatermelonExplosion chapter 21 . 8/15/2012
You said that Kusukusu was her sister! She's not an only child in this story!
| FrozenxRose chapter 27 . 8/14/2012
I just finished reading the story (faaaar too late I know, but still...)
And this story ish awesome :D
Sorry if this is just lame n all
I'm never one of good reviewer w
| Tish chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Oh my, where to start?
To begin with. I like the concept, not the most original out there of course, but nowadays originality is very hard to obtain anyway and since the idea itself is interesting I don't mind too much.
And now for the bad parts. Grammar. It's your friend, so stop misuing it. Also, why do you introduce the characters in such a fashion? It's lazy and amateurish and completely kills the point of discovering the characters and their personalities and other quirks later on!
Thirdly: COSTUME PORN! Please, don't describe their outfits in every small deatil unless you really have to and even then make it short and smooth.
"She wore a white short-sleeve shirt under a black blazer."
This sentence's okay. We know a little about what she looks like, and it's enough.
"She also wore a white tie, black skirt, white knee socks, black flats, and she had a black headband with a bow in the middle."
This one's too much and too loooong for just describing clothes. To be honest, it pained me to read it.
Either way, I've definitely seen worse out there (though that isn't a compliment by any means) and I still liked it.
| killer angel girl chapter 20 . 6/26/2012
OMG TADAGAY! oops I mean tadese (hehehe)
| 1Kolulu1 chapter 3 . 5/31/2012
I still kind of don't get the plot, but there is only one word for it:
| WinnieCocoaFlip chapter 28 . 3/21/2012
This story is freaking amazing! I spent all afternoon reading it and i knew it would go in my favorites after chapter 1. Gonna find the sequel now :)
| PanwuFace chapter 27 . 1/2/2012
...Its been a while since I've reviewed anything. Oh well.
Anyways, I hope your next story comes out soon! Personally, I think you should go with Love the Way You Lie.
Cant wait for the next story & thanks for mentioning me (CourtCourt226) in chapter 26!
| Danime95 chapter 27 . 12/19/2011
Hi hi! I loved the story sooo much, and can't wait to read the sequel as for the title i would go for test of trust, I think from the summary it fits best, and love the way you lie makes me think of a songfic! Anyway I'll be waiting for the sequel to come :)
| noreason-nopurpose chapter 27 . 12/18/2011
Interesting... I vote for Test of Trust, because Love the Way You Lie might make it seem like a songfic, which it isn't- right?
| Light-Princess14 chapter 27 . 12/18/2011
Test of Truth sounds too blah to me so maybe Love the Way you Lie is a more appropriate title :D Anyway the epilogue was good and it led perfectly into a sequel! Can't wait! Expect me to be your reviewer for a very LONG time!
| Ghosties chapter 27 . 12/18/2011
Test of trust
| j chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
hey what r the couples