|Reviews for Return of the Sage|
| LightningFireZC chapter 8 . 10/3
Cheery blossom is what Sakura called it since her name means cheery blossom, for Tsunade its more like heaven kick of pain or something
| grabblers chapter 11 . 5/27
Not a bad story, but lacks the impact of the Turbulent Tides or Naru/Kyu one-shot. Not sure about the unknown fourth member yet, but I don't feel like Mei or Yugito should be in the harem. Too much disparity with Kyu and Hiromi in depth.
Also I didn't like how we got Kyuubi to love him off scene. Three years time skip with no flashback to their development. And Hiromi unlike Kyuubi should have known only the cold Naruto yet also somehow had fallen for him during those three years. Without explanation also.
Another minus in my opinion is too much wasted power ups. Why even bother with adding his clan armour? In the end it was of no consequence. The same goes for Uzumaki linrary and Namikaze legacy. Yet we have new ones one after another.
Aside from that, it's pretty good. But no comparison to Turbulent Tides. Still good luck in case you'll ever decide to finish it.
| emmalilly21 chapter 6 . 5/12
Is Iwa going to freak and try to kill Naruto when they see him?
| surc chapter 11 . 2/3
still continuing, this bitch says. what a fucking retard
| Aurora - Kitsune Lord Of Fire chapter 8 . 1/10
Stop making them weak asshole. Filthy fucking Kishimoto lover.
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/10/2015
| JengaMaster chapter 11 . 10/3/2015
great story really want to see it updated though
| Kourtney Uzu Yato chapter 2 . 6/26/2015
Fuck you pinky! Fuck you! I hate you, you pathetic little whore of an Uchiha, please die and never return.
| colle chapter 3 . 6/18/2015
U rily shud think about furthering this story U know
| pr0dz chapter 1 . 5/27/2015
Even though I agree Tsunade doing this, it seems VERY personal since it's Naruto. Had it been anyone else, the punishment would be different on some scales.
| toofine89 chapter 11 . 4/6/2015
You have quite the enjoyable story. Often times I have to turn away from bashing fics, but you don't go overboard so I don't mind. Plus, I look forward to seeing the new Sasuke and Sakura. Likewise, I wonder about the Holy element. Is it a chakra type like one of the elemental chakra natures, or is it its own separate thing?
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/27/2014
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| 321Z3R0 chapter 3 . 8/11/2014
Dude, if the next one is in a desert, then your really predictable and not very good at riddles. Just saying.
| tyner0608 chapter 2 . 7/27/2014
If I was Shikamaru i would have beat the shit out of sakura for being such a little bitch
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/5/2014
First of all fish and marine animals dont die because of soap or shampoo