|Reviews for Passed Out|
| tpanassah chapter 4 . 3/6
Are you ever going to finish this story up or are you going to us hanging forever. I'm still going to keep to the fanfic gods for you to finish this.
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/13
Please tell me there will be an end to this story, it's so good!...oh no the last update was 2011?! Damnit!
| lawliness chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
This deserves much more reviews! Why did u suddenly give up this story? It has a great plot, and makes readers want to read on :) Pls continue!
| dbzlover1998 chapter 4 . 6/25/2012
Recentyly started reading this 4 chps turns out I accually really like them soooooo main' ?' are u gonna finish this story or is it a no go?
| PeaceHeather chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
I'm always glad to see a writer who is concerned enough about grammar and punctuation to DO something about it. This story is really interesting, and only one thing is throwing me off while I read it... the use of the word "it's" instead of "its".
The easiest way to remember the difference is to remember that the apostrophe is for contractions. "Doesn't" DOES NOT, for example. In this case you are taking out the letter "i": "it's" IT IS. So when you talk about the cat-gator and you mention "it's tail" you're really saying "it is tail".
"It's" confusing. :)
ANYWAY. Apart from that, this is a really interesting story and I love me some hurt!heroic!Zuko. I haven't read past the first chapter yet, so here's to some good Katara-comforty-goodness to make the poor boy feel better.
Cheers, and thanks for posting your story!
| Ivy Ratherbun chapter 3 . 4/13/2011
brilliant...i really loved your description of the sunrise and all...it was beautiful...
| AnnaAza chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
Love it! Glad you're back!
| SnoopyGirl213 chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
Hmm yeah Zuko is smexier when he's in "hate mode" and if he hadn't gotten mad at Katara for Wat she said he wouldve been OOC anyway update soon
| Ivy Ratherbun chapter 2 . 4/2/2011
| AnnaAza chapter 2 . 4/2/2011
Love this chapter! Can't wait for more updates!
| pyroaquaterrian chapter 2 . 4/2/2011
Wow! This story is truly AMAZING! I can't believe I haven't come across it before... Storyline is both original and refreshing not to mention beautifully written! I can't wait to read the next update... Hell, I'll admit it I'm completely hooked and in need of another fix...
Please-please update again as soon as you can.
And thanks for sharing.
| SnoopyGirl213 chapter 2 . 4/2/2011
ok first of all u totally freaked me out when i saw this was update i was like "wat the heck?" anyway this chapters good and im looking forward to more chapters
| Ruby of Raven chapter 2 . 4/2/2011
Katara you so confusing! I can't wait for the next chap.
| xBlackMao chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Such a good one-shot! Very detailed and cute to boot!
| Gina Jade chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
This is great! Amazing job! And I know what you mean about moving forward. It's extremely hard for me. But yeah, this is definitely going into my favorites.