Reviews for First Love
Phantom chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
XD Prussia should be careful!
TheLastofUs chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
THAT ENDING LOLOLOL OH MY GOSHXDDDD
i-Spit-on-Fire chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
I have never read an ending as awesome as that!
Jky. Malfoy chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
I loved the ending it was awesome I mean yeah I could do see Romano and Canada being really close and whatever :)
xXxXLupicideXxXx chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
XD
Poison Flower chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Oh god Romano...Its not like you haven't fucked by Spain so don't be so pissed.
Canada'sLittleMapleLover13 chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
aw that wa so adorable!
shoujo-goddess chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
love romanos last comment! DIIIIIIEEEEEE! ahahahaha! i love how kinda protective romano is over canada! WELL DONE!
Wolfen Artist of HetaStuck chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Ok rolmanols reaction. At the end tgotally made me laugh m.y ass of I love it
spida-dwag16 chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
I was laughing my head off when Romano said Canada and Prussia took a nap! XD
Hatora Tomoen chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
This story is made of awesomesauce!
Wanna be Alchemist chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
I'm sorry to give you a review comprised mostly of criticism, but I do have three complaints about your work.

One- You are misusing the term PoV. Point of View means just that. The point from which the reader is seeing the story unfold. You are using it to identify which character you are focusing on in Third Person PoV.

Two- Unless it is a list or poem formatted specifically for aesthetic reasons, such as making a lightning bolt as JK did with her dedications in the final Harry Potter book, body text should always be set to the left. Centering things like which PoV you're using is acceptable, but not the entire story. From a personal standpoint, I simply prefer it that way because I can start each line at the same place on the screen's x axis.

Three- There are a few times when you switch between tenses. I have been told off on this by no less than three English teachers, and so feel the need to emphasize to you its importance. At the start of a story, chapter, or PoV, pick a tense to use and stick with it. The only exception to this is when we are being told about a past event, but you've already nailed that one pretty neatly so I feel no need to elaborate further.

Please understand that I am not saying your work is bad, just that there you should take a bit more care in formatting and perhaps pay a bit more attention in English next time your teacher talks about the different points of view.

But completely disregarding the grammatical and formatting errors, the story is overall rather nice. PruCan is one of the pairings that I find rather cute, and sometimes a little smut is needed to get their love all the way across. Very good on Mattie's French, as well.

Ciao
ziashapeshifter101 chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
"You took a NAP!" God, Romano's so special.
riolusaura chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Ok 2 things:

1) ROMANO I LOVE YOU. xD "DIEEEEE!" god hes adorable!

2) "It isn't the rumored 'five meters' THANK GOD" ...I find this oddly hilarious...I think I lol'ed for at least a good 3 minutes...o.O I'm weird like that...
NoWhereToCallHome chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
This deserves more reviews!
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