|Reviews for Z|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
I'd like translate this story into Spanish, but I need your permission (sorry for my bad English)
| me chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
This is probably one of my most favorite stories on this site. The title totally fits with the story, and the story itself was amazing. Nice job! I only caught a few grammar mistakes, (like, 3) and I love zombie stories, so it was almost perfect to me. Love it!
| Darsca chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
That was.. disturbing. But really good. That is all.
| RianLena chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Wow that was super dark... But really good. So interesting and amazing! Really good job!
| MK08 chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
This was really awesome. Kind of depressing, but amazing nonetheless. The parts with Piccolo and Vegeta were the best, I think because before Gohan mentions how they became fathers for him, which just made it even more sad to read. But then the endin, wow. Poor Gohan :(
Seriously, awesome job. Why aren't there more DBZ zombie stories, dang it?
| tetisheri chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Holy damn...that's all i can think of to say...wow...(it's a good reaction)
| Death101- Fox Version chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Oh Freaking Hell! That ending was awesome! And the way you led up to it was equally awesome! The only thing I caught was that waste should have been waist when you mentioned it somewhere. I can't remember. Sorry. Anyways, this was awesome!
| Kakarot Son chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
That was surprisingly good with a nice twist to it at the end... The parts about Piccolo and Vegeta were rather good, but what happened to Goten? He didn't die with Chichi, did he?
| Do Delete This Account chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
This was great for the lack of a better word.
| hellfiresaiyan chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Amazing. Just amazing. I love the ending, but there is one thing I'm wondering about... Who'd the disease start with?
| chimney leaf chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Wow. Excellent, loved it, especially the bits with Vegeta and Piccolo. Great title as well, don't know if you meant it like this but am I right to be under the impression that you chose Z because it signifies the absolute end of something?
I don't like to nitpick on a story I enjoyed so much, but there were a few instances of mixups of to/too and use of apostrophes to signify plurals (e.g. car's which should just be cars, and energy's which should be energies).