Reviews for starlight grey
OhMyLeppy chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Suspense suspense suspense. You must update! And, maybe I could beta it for you? :3 Please? This is a good story. And usually I don't like OC's, but I like the idea of her friend know as a fire starter XD I have some ideas to help you along with it too, if you want them.
hanayou343 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
I don't mean to be, harsh or anything, I mean the story's pretty good, but I think spell-check might be a good idea... I mean, Hermes and Athena obviously worked hard to create it...
Thenamelessone...mmm m'n'm's are tasty...
ELMO-fAN cLUB MeMbER chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
more, or ill drown you in the styx
Akheilos and Delphin Inc chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Erm... try grammar, spellcheck and all those other wonderful options on your computer. I really don't mean to be mean, but this really is quite bad. Starlight is a Mary-Sue and there is no plot, I can see it already.

Sincerely,

Akheilos and Delphin

(Zinc)
Chick With Brains chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Some CC: The chapter is too short, the spelling and grammar is not so great, and your OC has definite Mary-Sue potential. Otherwise, keep writing.
It'sFun2BCrazy chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
This thing is horrible! No offense :)
Live.to.wonder chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Carry on :)
DarknessHedgie chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
This is good. You should continue because there aren't enough explanations in this.