Reviews for Then There Was Another
xDaughterOfKingsx chapter 6 . 5/25/2011
THIS IS PURE AWSOMENESS! I LOVE IT! I can't wait for more I love this story...love what the girl did with her hands :)
Lunar Mist chapter 6 . 5/25/2011
Ok... I think this chapter was kinda Mary-sue-ish, to be perfectly honest. Her friends were just sudden...there. On top of that, when did they suddenly get the super powers? I thought they were human and Anne was the one with the powers. And if they are human, there's no way one of them could dent Ironhide's armor, considering a car ran into Optimus' foot without there being much damage. Plus, if the hit was hard enough to dent their armor, then it would cause them at least a little bit of pain.

Lastly, if you're putting a song from another movie, be sure to give credit to that movie. Now I may be wrong on this, but if you don't give the credit, it is considered plagairism.

It's not a flame, so don't think of it as such. It's just a corrective criticism. I like your story. I like the plot and the characters, but my biggest fear whenever I'm writing my OCs or something in my plot is that my writings will become too Mary-Sueish, and if my stuff started becoming Marysueish, then I'd want someone to let me know. I look forward to the next update
xDaughterOfKingsx chapter 5 . 5/6/2011
ahhhh! Hurry hurry hurry an get the next chapter out I can't wait ...by the way you did great I love this story :)
Guest chapter 5 . 5/5/2011
I like it
Lunar Mist chapter 5 . 5/5/2011
It was a good chapter, but I had trouble following it... Maybe it was just me (cuz Heaven knows I haven't slept well in a while) but I was very confused about where everyone was and why they were there. The best example would be when they head to jail to pick up Sam. Why did she invite her friend? Or are they just very close? Very interesting chapter. I just couldn't follow it
Argentdayl chapter 4 . 4/1/2011
You're evil. This story is too good to pull evil prank-chapters on. Hurry up, May!
Uncertain-Angel chapter 4 . 4/1/2011
Lol! That's just wrong! Get the next chapter out soon, I'm liking this one a lot!
BuckityBarnes chapter 4 . 4/1/2011
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOO! I THOUGHT THIS WAS A CHAPTER!
Wings of Tears chapter 4 . 4/1/2011
That was really cruel! Please update soon, for real next time.
Greentabbycat chapter 4 . 4/1/2011
your mean for putting up a fake chapter, put it was a very clever trick...
Lunar Mist chapter 3 . 3/29/2011
I think it is interesting. I am confused on one thing: how did Anne know Bee's name? Or is that going to be later in the story?
One of Those Faces chapter 3 . 3/23/2011
I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR! UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!
purrpix chapter 3 . 3/21/2011
OMG i love this story keep going please update soon too _ Love it love it. I can just see little bots running around now.
Wings of Tears chapter 3 . 3/21/2011
I'm really really really really curious about what is going to happen next! Please Please Please Please update soon. 10/10
Greentabbycat chapter 3 . 3/21/2011
great job so far, and i have to say you've got me hooked. plz update soon!
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