Reviews for The Maiden's Sin
amber chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
I am OBSESSED with mr and I was not offended jsyk. no worries :) I actually loved it! keep up the good work. I think Taki was only a little bit un-realistic in the end but other than that, everything was on point. :) congratulations on the good work
EtheralEscencexAllHotNaruGuys chapter 1 . 7/19/2015
Lol, my cousin was reading this when I wasn't looking and was all like "Oooo!~ YUMMY!" :3
LW12 chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
It's good
witchfire24 chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
I really like how you portrayed poor Taki's sexual frustration. The wine was kind of like a slightly classier sex pollen : ) and I really enjoyed it. (Though-and I'm sure others have already pointed this out-you need to put commas before the closing quotation marks for the dialogue.)
NyxLied chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
SO AMAZING. Enjoyed everything and every word. Very hot! You're an amazing writer!
The Wonderful Marshmallow chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
that's wa truly amazing. I loved it
starxrob123 chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
HOT DAMN. That was tres delicious! Very good story! I use this for my stories!? :3
AngelRuby235 chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Klaus had drugged Taki?:-D Wise guy:-D Offended? What did you mean by u hope u haven't offended any MR fans? You made our day,dear:-D ds was the BEST MR fic EVER!:-D:-D THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH FOR DS:-) Such an awesome fic full of hotness;-) & fluff (for a change). EXCELLENT WORK!
Ayana Beatrice Poblete chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
This story is too amazing to stop, it's to HOT to stop.
Shineska chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
I found this a few days ago and it took me away! Klaus and Taki here a believable and not at all out of character. I could see Klaus going to extreme measures to get Taki to let go and give himself up completely to him. It was a little heartbreaking too but so sweet and hot at the same time _
I read the other fiction too and that one was even more heartbreaking and brutal but no matter how much Klaus takes away from him, Taki wants nothing more but him.
I would love love it if you wrote more Maiden Rose stories!
Akira Nishikawa chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
great work enjoy every part of it *_*
Marina.J.contrer chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
wow that was a good story I love Maiden Rose so much because it is a good show to watch with adults and fan girls that are out there I know that you like yaoi and this is it to be watching if you like male and male relateionships well this one is it for you:-) oh, and the Taki and Klaus fans I love these people together too I think they are a good couple whitch I think it like older and younger relatetionship pretty much ;-) oh and one late thing good job MissMarilynRamirez - sama
Amarissia chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
Wow, that was hot. And very well done. Thank you for it!
Otomi chapter 1 . 4/15/2012


i really like this one, because it is something that sounds so possible...

but also... i wonder if Klaus would really use drugs on Taki...

Taki even hates when Klaus uses drugs on himself... so if he will find out that Klaus used drugs on HIM he would freak out... but in the end he would again forgive Klaus...

there is just no way, Taki wouldn't forgive Klaus and i like how you showed it here...

while reading this it was realistic...

no OOC...

Very Well Done!
The lady loves the dark chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
What excellent writing! What excellent detail! I could even picture it. I enjoyed it to the maximum! Thank you very much! Well done!
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