i loved this one it was sooooooo funny

Firstly: Loving the title, I love AVPM/S and "What the devil is going on here?" is my favourite quote in the whole play. love you. Secondly: Good chapter...although so sad China killed herself :(

SKDBFDSGBKS I LOVE YOU

I'm sat here giggling like a complete nutter because it's brilliant, dkfjgbsj

Something about this story makes me want to keep reading!

Reading the reviews, I noticed you keep getting a lot of comments on your formatting and spelling. WHO CARES! It's how you write, and I LOVE IT ALL! Keep up the fantastic work. :)

I LOVE IT ! That's pretty much what I do too :3

Our conversations are epic. Nuff said.

:D

EPIC I KILLED SKULDUGGERY!

not that i dont like the dude hes epic to but h cant drink red bull and coke so hes not AS epic. but im so powerful to kill skul AND val?AWESOME IM F $%ING POWERFUL XD lov it *does happy dance in internet cafe getting strage glances from peoples but who cares?NOT ME continues dancing like a freak*

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WMUHAHAHAHHA! Totally evil character! Soo cool thanks XD

Cool, only gonna say one thing. it's Paramore. Just coz I love them. XD Other than that I liked it :)

Do you still need OC's? Then here's one from me...

Name: Thoughts Misplaced

Gender: Female

Power: Adept, can read people's minds

Clothes: Steampunky, goggles are a must have :)

Appearence: Dark copper coloured hair that hangs in ringlets around her face-chin length. Innocent face, pale with grey eyes. 5'2 and slim.

Personality: Bubbly and trustful, but not always trustworthy, ran away from home in England and hasn't seen her parents for 3 years, is 12. Clever, wiser than her years. Loves anything to do with the occult, and loves mind games :P

Age: 12

There is that OK? :)

I've always been a Chinduggery fan. This was pretty cool! I didn't see any mistakes. Not with my bad-mistake-noticing eyes anyway.

Good lucky!

-MW98

Name-Given:Sarah Lakes Taken:Jasmine words

Gender-Female.

Power -Yes.

If yes what-Elemental and Necromancer(power comes from small bracelet.

Clothes-Band t-shirt and jeans or trousers sometimes black trench coat.

Appearance-Dark brown hair and eyes, average hight for age, slim, and muscled arms and legs from training in combat skills.

Personality-Easy to get along with once youve gotten to know her, at start is quiet and speaks when necerserie, but when with people she knows youve got a wild child on yur hands.(god save us all if you give her coke and red bull at once)has a bright personality and very imagnitive which adds to her creative artwork which she expreeses her emotions through. has good vocabuary for her age(sadly cant spell many words she actualy says) and has read many books which adds to understnding of words.

Age-16

hope you like character sorry about some spelling mistakes lap top keeps chuking a mental *screams at lap top in frustration and goes and sits in sad corner with bottle of coke nd red bull for an hour* ..

'Your' and 'you're'. There. Is. A. Difference.

An OC?

Sally Sinensis.

Female.

Adept.

Sensitive- sees things that aren't there.

Frilly green dresses with long, impractical skirts that catch on things and make her trip, with long, impractical sleeves that catch on things and knock things over, and black 16-hole Doc Martens.

Black eyes with no 'whites'. Never smiles. Skin a sickly shade of pink. Has the face of an eleven-year-old child. Rather thin.

Somewhat dull, unintelligent and bad at talking. Looks constantly half-asleep. Useless in anything more physically strenuous than walking. 'Dreary teenager' type. Anorexic. Likes tea, thus 'Sinensis'.

Twenty-seven in real years.

~Mademise Morte

'h3e'? Really?

~Mademise Morte

Paragraphs are your friends. Use them.

~Mademise Morte

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The 'Skulduggery' in 'Skulduggery's Bentley' should be capitalized.

~Mademise Morte