Reviews for EO Challenge: Law of Fives
The Truth's Lie chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
I had to stop to google "Septicaemia".

I feel stupid now.

*facepalm*

Lovely story.
afickleflakes chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
HI PERSON. UHM. I HAVE BEEN IN SCHOOL WHILE READIN THIS AND I THINK I CAN SAFELY SAY I FEEL STRANGELY SATISFIED BY YOUR AWESOME WRITING. I SHALL CONTINUE TO READ NOW. OKAY THANKS BYE. KEEP UP THE AWESOMENESS!
Rosetta Brunestud chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Awesome *-*

Really loved this one!

Kisses

Rosetta
Nana56 chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Love it when things in a fic are all related by the same number. It takes some planning and work. You did it very well and even within the limit of the 100 words.

Nicely done. :)
Soncnica chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
OH MAN *shudders* seriously... that was freakin' AMAZING!

the repeating of the word FIVE, made this story creepy in a way but not bad creepy... just creepy! this was just amazing... ! idk, I have no words! I LOVE THIS!

and the ending is perfect...

man, I'm ... speechless... I just... really really love this!

hugs

S.
MeAzrael chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Outstanding, Dizzo! Really, such a wonderful rhythm and blues :-) A whole story in these few lines (more than 5, I'm afraid) - loved the hypnotic repetition of the five, like an old fairy tale - and woven between so much stubborness, pain, helplessness and fear, so much Winchester style. Magic!

xxx Kate
Amberdreams chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Oooh me likey. Sick wounded obstinate Dean, worried Sam and the final relief with the return of brotherly bitchiness. I liked the repetition in the first part, it set up a nice rhythm.
LaedieDuske chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Oh my. Holy hell. If you were to ever turn this into a full-length story I'd be first in line to read. Ouch, that's just some serious stuff there, and damn stubborn Dean. Why can that boy never just accept help? *sigh* *hugs Dean* He worries me you know. Good thing he's got Sammy!
nwspaprtaxis chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Oh wow. I really really liked this one - it was intense and evocative and the use of "five" just kept me reading on... poor Dean, poor SAM!
Zinfer chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Really cute. Good job
Enkidu07 chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
*claps* beautifully written!
Vanessa Sgroi chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Ohhh, another great one! The image of Dean seizing outside the shower just did it for me. Loved it.