|Reviews for A Shinobi's Sins|
| xXPOPPXx chapter 2 . 2/22/2011
ah you updated at the perfect time :3 i just checked my email like 'i need somethin 2 read' and BOOM.
my "words of advice" to the Shinobi Sin's cast:
akira- no one wants to get up at 5 am... if you woke me up that early,i would not hesitate to bite your face off, no matter how much i love you :3
nero- stealing is bad :)
ruriko-...well, we're basically on the same page...
sora- be nice to ruriko :D
kazuya and co- ...idk, don't get drunk?
botan- STAY EXACTLY THE SAME BOTAN!
i loved the chapter, just bytheby
| wisdom-jewel chapter 2 . 2/22/2011
Mayu is good
| xXPOPPXx chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
awwww! it doesnt matter how many times you'll change the story or rewrite it... Akira is the best kid ever! :3
i like it so far, though the first few sentences (when it was with ruriko not daiki and friends) i got a bit confused, but maybe im just simple minded...
anyway. hope you continue when you can!
| wisdom-jewel chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
I'm still thinking of making a few changes, not a lot. But I really like to see what changes you have made.
| sco23 chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
All right. I can't wait to read more of Ruriko's adventures.
| BROOKE MARY Winchester chapter 1 . 2/20/2011