Reviews for A Shinobi's Sins
xXPOPPXx chapter 2 . 2/22/2011
ah you updated at the perfect time :3 i just checked my email like 'i need somethin 2 read' and BOOM.

so yea.

my "words of advice" to the Shinobi Sin's cast:

akira- no one wants to get up at 5 am... if you woke me up that early,i would not hesitate to bite your face off, no matter how much i love you :3

nero- stealing is bad :)

ruriko-...well, we're basically on the same page...

sora- be nice to ruriko :D

kazuya and co- ...idk, don't get drunk?


i loved the chapter, just bytheby
wisdom-jewel chapter 2 . 2/22/2011
Mayu is good
xXPOPPXx chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
awwww! it doesnt matter how many times you'll change the story or rewrite it... Akira is the best kid ever! :3

i like it so far, though the first few sentences (when it was with ruriko not daiki and friends) i got a bit confused, but maybe im just simple minded...

anyway. hope you continue when you can!
wisdom-jewel chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
I'm still thinking of making a few changes, not a lot. But I really like to see what changes you have made.
sco23 chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
All right. I can't wait to read more of Ruriko's adventures.
BROOKE MARY Winchester chapter 1 . 2/20/2011