Reviews for The Heart of a Thorn
Guest chapter 11 . 10/8/2016
What about Windclan calls off the truce and the whole clan even queens and elders except for kits attack thunderclan and try to kill firestar
Robinstar chapter 11 . 12/19/2013
He gets mousepaw
Fireflame 's chapter 11 . 8/13/2012
Plz do more! U should do leafpool and Crowfeathers POV! And maybe bring them to SkyClan and have another litter of kits! Good or bad idea? All well just to tell u, I hate,and don't like to write!
Ff chapter 6 . 8/13/2012
Awesome their leavin the clans
Fireflame 's chapter 2 . 8/13/2012
Wuv it!))
Deleteduserdeletedaccount chapter 2 . 2/22/2012
Kestrelpaw! Not krestlepaw!
RavenWing1997 chapter 10 . 4/11/2011
Eu Nakamura chapter 10 . 4/8/2011
Uh oh! It's time for Warriors 2: Revenge of the Nightcloud! lol i'm just kidding with the title XD

DIE NIGHTCLOUD DIE! x3 anyway... may I suggest you make Nightcloud die, after being injured badly by Lionblaze (if he's there lol XD)
A graceful haze chapter 10 . 4/8/2011
wooooooow i hope nightcloud doesnt kill thornclaw that would just be awful
xxEu-chan. lazy to login chapter 9 . 4/8/2011
Oh! Awesome! Onestar lost a life... now it's time for another cat to kill... it's Nightcloud! You want to be with Breezepelt then die! :D

lol update soon x3
Bofur's Hat chapter 4 . 4/7/2011
Imma die soon without that chapter!


Bofur's Hat chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
NightCloud should push off Firestar and kill Onestar herself, like scrouge killed TigerStar. xD Teach him what he deserves!

Tallstar, and the other awesome Starclan kitties should shone Onestar and not except him. Muahaha. Then The dark forest will rise and then Onestar shall get revenge, but Starclan shall join, and

mysterious loners, and rouges come and help because they hate some of them Dark forest kitties, and possiblly in love with starclan cats? That some good ideas? rofl
Fintail chapter 9 . 4/7/2011
This is interseting, but how old is Ashheart, and I thought Nightcloud died earlier. I like the story though.
Bofur's Hat chapter 9 . 4/7/2011
Just saying, My names Rapidfeather and

I LOVED this chapter!

Oh and I love my plush toy. xD

Bofur's Hat chapter 8 . 4/6/2011
Onestar should die. :P

So should Breezepelt,

and I say Jayfeather should end it with the help of the awesome StarClan cats:

BlueStar ,

Longtail ,

Mousefur ,

Cinderpelt ,

and Silverstream!

In the battle, there should be a sad forgiveness moment right when Firestar rips Onestar's throught (if it happens)
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