|Reviews for Herwald von Einzbern and the Philosopher's Stone|
| Mernom chapter 18 . 7/27
Very nice idea too make Hoenhime into Felnel, the two are basically pararels.
I was going too ask last chapter about the gate of truth, but you answered my questions with that chapter.
Very good ending, let's see what the sequel has on store!
| Mernom chapter 17 . 7/27
Nice touch with the rules, and the ending..
| Mernom chapter 16 . 7/27
| Mernom chapter 15 . 7/27
Aaaand the party is decinated already :-)
Well that had to be done to keep the universe in one piece, so I'll forgive you. ;-)
| Mernom chapter 14 . 7/27
So after all the hidden events, skill grinding, and raising affection levels, the party is finally ready! Time to take on the boss!
| Mernom chapter 13 . 7/27
That was a nice fix of the fail.
However, let's see if that ominous 'it was too easy' feeling goes anywhere...
| Mernom chapter 12 . 7/27
Again, nice reference to the source material.
| Mernom chapter 11 . 7/27
A nice chapter, going to keep reading this
| Mernom chapter 10 . 7/27
You keep referencing source material, while turning out into an original story. And a well written one at that.
| Mernom chapter 9 . 7/26
That was even better then I imagined it too be. Good job!
| Mernom chapter 8 . 7/26
That was a good chapter, and that omaka... Priceless
| Axcel chapter 18 . 7/26
Nah, the association wouldn't go after them for glimpsing the Root. They didn't for all the other people to have canonically done so, after all.
| Mernom chapter 6 . 7/26
That is an interesting point of view on Dumbeldore's behaviour.
| Axcel chapter 4 . 7/26
By the way, I assume that in this fic you are going for a "born with the ability to use magic" as the limiting factor in magi instead of the natsuverse's "magic is a finite resource". Otherwise, the Wizarding World would have a vested interest in not reproducing and in either turning away or killing muggleborns and half-bloods.
By the way, Rider is A) Greek and B) speaking English, so she wouldn't add any honorifics to Harry's name.
| Mernom chapter 5 . 7/26
Nice chapter, add expected Fred and George don't let down