Reviews for Herwald von Einzbern and the Philosopher's Stone
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28
Completely fucking hate it
CrimiK chapter 1 . 1/5
I DIDN'T EXPECT THE DEUS EX MACHINA
warpterror chapter 1 . 8/25/2016
Oh God I just started reading and the amount of typos in only the first paragraph of the AN is staggering. Sorry but if the rest of the fic is like this it's unreadable.
Jefepato chapter 3 . 8/17/2016
Honestly, the HP-verse and Nasuverse don't really fit all that well together in general, but the part that really killed my suspension of disbelief was Kiritsugu teaching Shirou the importance of the Unforgivable Curses.

Kiritsugu was a ruthless bastard who didn't give a damn about magical traditions. Why would he care about that rule in particular?
Shadow of a Memory chapter 18 . 7/12/2016
Reality love the FMA references, especially having that man of all people be the Alchemist himself. All in all this was a brilliant read. Keep up the good work Kyugen
mfmxxx chapter 1 . 6/23/2016
So read both stories of this, its great, would love to see a prequel with the grail events properly explained.
Zeru'Xil chapter 7 . 3/21/2016
So far loving this story though I see you haven't continued it in years
Hope you will complete it someday
thepkrmgc chapter 12 . 2/28/2016
its a shame, i kind of hoped ron ended up pulped, though theres plenty of time for that yet
thepkrmgc chapter 11 . 2/28/2016
harry has a fortune at his disposal so why doesnt he get a portkey to japan, he clearly misses them dearly
thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 2/28/2016
harrys got a pressing desire to want the stone, i doubt the mirror will stop him though
thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 2/28/2016
it seems like herwalds been practicing with his bro, making a monomolecular blade in the heat of battle is no joke: hopefully he can ditch the rap
thepkrmgc chapter 8 . 2/28/2016
its good that harrys befreinded neville, any chance of seeing letters too and from shirou and co?
thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 2/28/2016
its good that herwald called draco out on his racism, hopefully hermione wont be too traumatized when he pulps the troll
thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 2/28/2016
its good that harry doesnt subscribe to the pureblood stuff, i suspect any who insult his big-bro like that is going to suffer
thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 2/28/2016
harry is a lot less angry in this chapter, and while i doubt that harry has the paitence for dealing wit the weasleys i can totally understand the twins awe of shirou
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