|Reviews for Herwald von Einzbern and the Philosopher's Stone|
| Phearo chapter 6 . 4/29
Please don't interject an A/N between the story.
| Phearo chapter 1 . 4/29
Heh. I find it funny where you could see where the excerpts of Fate/zero's actual novel translation end and where the author's own writing begins. Maybe make it a tad bit more seamless?
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 1 . 4/8
hmm, actually in noway does Shirou actually have a harem, in each route he is paired with 1 or 2 out of Rin, Saber, Sakura and maybe Rider (not to sure about that 1)
so yes, Harry could be paired with Rin, Illya or anyone really though i am hoping for Illya and Mordred if you bring her in
| HikaruWinter chapter 5 . 2/4
Ah, so Harry has the common sense that is so lacking in Magical Britain *smiles happily* Now, on to the shorting! *mouse reels and clatters to the 'Next' button*
| HikaruWinter chapter 2 . 2/4
Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Study hard, be evil *srugs* I can see this being their motto. In german, of course.
| Shinoki chapter 18 . 1/10
When I first started reading, I wasn't expecting much since I'm not a big Harry Potter person, but... this was good...
| deathstalker982 chapter 9 . 1/9
just thought i should point out, while your explanation of how the blade could pierce the troll's back is valid, the theory of a monofiliment edge, aka an edge with a single molecule thick, states that it would cut through anything, and i do mean anything. it is stated that such a theoretical weapon could cut through solid titanium as if it weren't even there, so nothing could stop a blade like that, not even magic, if it were to exist.
of course the theory of a monofiliment edge also states that it would degrade so fast that before it was even measurable the blade would no longer be a monofiliment edge, so it is an impossibility right now, though with magic i suppose you could make something up to say it wouldn't degrade
| dhyetaX1999 chapter 18 . 12/30/2014
Firstly, I hope you don't mind receiving a (mostly) criticizing review after you have finished a story so log ago.
Second, I want to ask, if you decided that Harry will still BFF with the Golden Trio why woupd you place him in Slytherin. I don't know if I'm stereotyping, but usually authors choose to place Harry in Slytherin because they intend to focus on Harry's cunning/ambition and therefore, a laying low for the first few years/months while building alliances/influence and made beneficial acquaintances/allies inside and outside of his House. What's the point of him sorted into Slytherin in this fic really? He also didn't seem to have the same self-serving attitude that typical Slytherin posessed. Sure, if you made him an ambitious boy with the goal to find the solution to Ilya and Sakura's condition then I can understand. But this story is nearly not that different from canon. Not Harry's characteristic, nor there are no different significant events occuring with his sorting to Slytherin.
| Resisting the Borg chapter 18 . 12/8/2014
Well, that was a thing.
I've got to wonder, why are people so negative about Dumbledore?
| Resisting the Borg chapter 7 . 12/7/2014
OK, reading this for the first time, but 2 things:
1st, is the Slytherin password REALLY Namor's war cry?
2nd, I think I noticed a Buso Renkin shout out in the author's note.
Thus far, you've done a very good job-Harry-sorry, Herwald-is not sorted arbitrarily into Slytherin, it's a result of his differing upbringing and new personality. I like that you've taken this into account, but so many AU fics are about a Harry in Ravenclaw or Slytherin that it can get slightly annoying. Didn't mean to complain, like I said, it's done very reasonably.
| Hakurei no Miko chapter 17 . 11/25/2014
oh no... is illya's time up? damn it if only herwald saved the stone...
| Hakurei no Miko chapter 12 . 11/25/2014
the root smiled! run for your lives!
| Hakurei no Miko chapter 10 . 11/25/2014
jackie chan is awesome :)
| Hakurei no Miko chapter 9 . 11/25/2014
ooohhhh gore... and haha i love the garcher reference
| Hakurei no Miko chapter 8 . 11/25/2014
hahaha lol the omake though im curious as to who warded them the points.