|Reviews for kids of the seireitei|
| metsfan101 chapter 32 . 12/24/2011
cant wait for part 2
| metsfan101 chapter 28 . 11/13/2011
i give this a 10/10 because this is really good.
| metsfan101 chapter 26 . 11/2/2011
this was really good
| Kindered Spirit chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
This chapter is very interesting. you're very good at description. I have no right to critic you in anyway because i haven't earned that right yet myself. I'll give you a tip though ;)
this wasn't in this story but another i read. Whacko mundo isn't right. it is Hueco Mundo ;)
Don't get discouraged because for the life of me i can't remember how to spell seireitei. even if my life depended on it.
KEEP WRITING Though because you're good at it. and i'm not just saying that :)
Practice makes perfect take it from someone who knows.
Hope this helps.
| DarkMage6 chapter 10 . 4/29/2011
Wa-la! I have read it.
Good story line, and like anybody and everybody should do, check your spacing and spell check. I noticed only minor things though, and there wasn't a lot.
I admit, I have trouble keeping the kids straight. But that might be because I worked 20 hours straight. . .
| ViralBacteria chapter 9 . 4/14/2011
really cute chapters! I really like their adventures and stuff :) question, d'you have a beta? because I'm looking for one...
| Beckon chapter 5 . 3/23/2011
Well hopefully Jinta gets better, then again I've never had pneumonia before though so I don't know what that's like.
Ikkaku as a teacher is just so amusing though lol.
| Beckon chapter 3 . 3/15/2011
"Karin," Ikkaku called, annoyed. "What did I tell you about balls in the house?"
I laughed so hard when reading this line- for obvious reasons- but I don't think my teacher appreciated it. Best line yet.
| Beckon chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Ayoo about time Aizen and Momo had some babies; Hitsugaya and Matsumoto for that fact too.
Gonna read some more and see where this goes.
| ViralBacteria chapter 3 . 3/4/2011
wow, this is a really interesting story! your grammar/spelling isn't bad, it's actually perfect!
i'd like to see some romance between the little men characters in the future :)