Reviews for Breaking Point
CosmicBeing chapter 1 . 10/3/2014
I honestly hope you don't have him give a rats-ass about those whores.
Agato - The Hadou Inari chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Oh get the hell out of here you wannabe Author. You don't have the first clue as to what the hell your doing.
Lord Mortensen chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
cool! please update soon
reven228 chapter 2 . 8/22/2011
lengthen the chapters a bit, widen the characters, and throw in some situations, and I believe you'll have a golden story. Keep goin and stay golden
Ashar chapter 3 . 7/14/2011
Sorry, but... what exactly are you trying to do? Microscopic chapters that do not explain something as the WORLD SHATTERING changing of Keitaro from canon are bad enough, up to the point one could be excused to believe you simply swapped him with an OC... or even, HORROR, a SI... then a third chapter that has NO resemblance to logic nor timeframes...
MoRe PLz chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
nice job i hope you make more soon this not going be a Keixnaru Plz no