Reviews for A Dragonfly's Heart
sonamyfanxxx chapter 10 . 4/18/2014
KingBowser444 chapter 22 . 11/25/2013
I was hoping that everyone would get a happy ending, but Rouge/Knuckles weren't so lucky. Anyway, your writing was very detailed and, while they departed from the norm a bit, your character representations were good as well. The only suggestion that I can give you would be to maybe put a "...", a line between paragraphs, or some other way of transitioning more smoothly between plot points; I got lost sometimes when you were switching between Amy/Sonic to Rouge to Eggman at various points. Other than that, I really enjoyed the story. Keep it up!
scythe's serenade chapter 22 . 9/13/2013
I'm one of those bastards that favorite a ton of stories, and don't leave reviews normally. But this was freakin' amazing, so I will say, it was freakin' amazing. Loved it completely, thank you.
Luna starwolf chapter 22 . 8/9/2013
I'm crying right now its so beautiful and lovely its sad that Amy's sister died :'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:' (:'(:'(:'(:'(
Leah chapter 22 . 6/28/2013
I love this story! I've just finished reading it. And it's amazing! Your a great writer and you should keep writing. The descriptions, the action everything. It was all amazingly great! You can really feel like your part of the action and you wrote this so well that you can even imagine it happening right infront of you as if your actually there witnessing it in every detail. And seeing as your story does this, comes alive, I can tell you that your a fantastic writer. I honestly couldn't stop reading it! It's that good. Keep writing your amazing storys! :)
DW611 chapter 22 . 6/28/2013
Wow...that was one of the best stories I've ever read :)
Guest chapter 9 . 4/5/2013
o.O sorry but I'm starting to get confused.
leah chapter 2 . 3/19/2013
it was amazing
XanaduHawk chapter 22 . 1/24/2013
This was an amazing story and wonderfully written. You're very talented.
xSiReNs chapter 22 . 4/13/2012
GrandTheftTARDIS chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
This is a brilliant piece of work. I never finished it though because I remembered I was reading another story.
Angel of Pandemonium chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
Isobel chapter 22 . 11/27/2011
Erm... Does this mean that I'm a puppet?

Great story. Did Sonic or Egghead die?
Rayne chapter 22 . 11/12/2011
Aw, this story was so well written. Amazing job, I loved it!
Miss Topaz chapter 22 . 11/5/2011
This story truly is a masterpiece. You have a captivating style of writing and you are a greatly talented person for creating such an imaginative, creative story with very few errors. I love the flow of everything and how all the subplots were well mixed.

You can tell right away how much effort was put into this. Everything is so well thought from the character's emotions, to the mental states of the characters, to the description of everything. You can also see the great improvement in writing as you read the fiction.

Overall, wonderful job! This is easily one of my favorites.
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