|Reviews for The First Human Spectre|
| BlindFox455 chapter 36 . 3/7/2016
This was definitely a different take on of my most beloved stories and I think you treated it well. It was very descriptive and, in places, eloquently written. There are fair amount of spelling and diction errors scattered throughout these 36 chapters that caught me up but overall, very well written. As to the plot, alienating Anderson and Hackett while under developing the friendship with Garrus has ripped away some of my favorite parts of the plot. Killing off Kirrahe was also unnecessary and unfortunate given the role he plays in 3. All that being said, I am looking forward to reading the next installments and am very thankful you took the time to write this. Enjoy your day.
The Blind Fox
| Delta Marauder chapter 36 . 6/23/2015
Love the ending, builds suspense for the sequel, good work on the whole story in general and keep up the great work.
| Delta Marauder chapter 33 . 6/18/2015
Huh, so Quarians have secondary... Never mind. Anyways didn't think you would write half a lemon but alright, I expected scene changes.
| Delta Marauder chapter 29 . 6/15/2015
What species in Mass Effect had hair besides humans? Also Quarians do have hair...
| Sephiran Lehran chapter 19 . 3/28/2015
I was really into this story until this chapter. The amount of detail and saying the same thing is getting overwhelming and very frustrating. Furthermore, Shepard's starting to develop a major God complex. He seems to think he's the only one who can decide what's right and what's wrong, he blames the Alliance for every terrible thing humanity has done, and he's always right. He refuses to see someone else's perspective unless he sympathizes with them. The BAat situation is a perfect example. What happened to those kids was terrible but he's blaming the Alliance for something Conatix did. I will say that the relationship between Shepard and Tali is very well written though. That more than anything else is what got me started on the story and it's for that reason that I'll continue to read it. I'm not quite as enthusiastic as I was though.
| Fyreyes chapter 36 . 3/27/2015
Wow. This was certainly the best mass effect story I've ever read, with kind of a different twist than most. I've seen anti alliance before, but never one that fit so well with canon facts. Plus, the pairing felt well paced and real compared to most other fics, no "I love you after 24 hours forever!" overall, a very impressive story! Well done! :)
| Williamgbirkin chapter 24 . 11/22/2014
I wanted to say this before, but I guess I forgot, and I don't know if someone else has already said this before, so it could be a moot point, but Quarians don't have backwards joints on their knees. They simply have a curved shinbone, and are somewhat Digitigrade, if I'm not mistaken.
| MKTerra chapter 29 . 11/11/2014
well, they did exactly that for Tali. Her picture. It was Miss England, or whatever that had been photoshopped. Pretty, but a cop out.
| MKTerra chapter 21 . 11/11/2014
this isn't too much different from ME 2, well, minus Mordin promising to give the equivalent of the Alien Karma Sutra to Shephard. I don't think anything in the game made me laugh that hard! Well, other than his singing.
| Michaelkoc1 chapter 36 . 12/14/2013
This was really interesting. Loved the new spin on it, i have to admit i agree with most of your alliance bashing tho. I always thought that BAaT thing was effed up.
| jaffa3 chapter 10 . 12/6/2013
I always wished there was an option like that after the Turian councliar said Shepard would go to any lengths to save a human colony.
Love your story by the way
| DeathmatchDrunkard chapter 36 . 11/4/2013
When I saw this first, I thought "Meh, another Shep/Tali...". Then I actually read the summary and was like "Heavy anti-Alliance slant?! I gotta read this!". And I wasn't disappointed in the slightest.
A brilliant piece of fanfiction you've created here.
| Guest chapter 30 . 8/15/2013
I'm very excited for your ME3! Tfhs series so far is awesome
| Barleyguy chapter 36 . 7/26/2013
Your ending was...I don't know how much times better than ME's original was i mean holy frigg that was epic loved it. Now I'm gonna move onto ME 1/2 keep updating eh
| Barleyguy chapter 32 . 7/26/2013
That had to be the most awe inspiring speech I have ever seen, holy shit that was an awesome read. Your Jonathan Shepard is one in a million that's for sure