Reviews for You Burn Me Away
Serenity Tsukasa chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
D: all I can say is: beautiful~
Troublesome Dragon chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Artfully done, slowly loosing himself into the abyss the only thing he can say is Carly. It even parallels some with Carly's death on the show

Jack Jack Jack
Turbo K1000 chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
me: u-u killed jack! h-he's...he's...

carly: *jaw drops* omg...i'm such a BITCH!

jack: ...*speachless*

me: yeh u r! u didn't even turn him into a dark signer!


jack: oh great i've been able to aviod that for nearly a year! thanks TK!

me: it's about time she knew!

*explains everything*

carly: ohhhhhh...jack loves me...*smirks*

me: he knows u love him too

carly: CRAP!

me: ur line jack...

jack: update soon *tries to talk to the hyperventalating carly*

me: peace out...XD
vapanalley chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
So poetic and sad and the imagery is really, really nice. The parallelism that runs through everything and the repetition and the continual changing of the way Jack begins to view everything is so eerie. :)