Reviews for The Professional
Chilly Howdy chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Hey thanks for sharing this story :o) Hmmm Pornstarward was so different to the one she Married but at least he had tricks from there! Loved it! Chilly x
KNG1986 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
This was very sweet and sexy.
echopj chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Loved this. I want a caring Edward like this one. Your writing flows so well and describing their lives is so well done.
KareBear1965 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
I enjoyed this and to think of Edward as a porn star is interesting.

Hugs
the brunette writer chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Aww that was too cute! It was just sweet and nice :) Amazing little story.

love,

the brunette writer
sarahlouise80 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
awesome story it was so it.
sariedee chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
awww pornward. love that his video came with her toys lmao
sleepwalker1 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Beautiful...So real and true. You never know how truly wonderful people are until we drop our pre-conceived notions and prejudices.
Milalencar chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Your mind is just a great place. :D I think I've told you this before. But you always make me care so much for your characters.

This is another one of those times. I hope the people the story is inspired by are now as happy as this version of E&B are.

Thank you for sharing your words.
twilight1972 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Wonderful, perfect, and just the right amount of spice!
pipelynn chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
i loved this edward and this thoughtful bella! so sweet to hear about someone finding "the one" the second time around...this was also such a great esme.
Twilightlvr1 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
I've always adored your writing dear and you definitly didn't disapoint on this one. Very nicely done. I liked the way you told Bella's story, the end of her marraige to Aro and her interest in Edward (especially after seeing him on video!) I also really liked that they went semi slowly and she gave him a chance without judging him. I thought your Esme was really cute in this! The lemon was hot without being overly graphic, it all felt very romantic. Great job!
philadelphic chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
you have restraint! there's enough happening here for a full fic :-)

xoxo
Catiedidit chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Good job!
katmom chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Lovely, simply lovely...

I'm glad she bought you too!

Kathie
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