|Reviews for Cracks in the Pavement|
| halessss16 chapter 20 . 3/15
This story kept me absolutely captivated. While the basic storyline has been written about time and time again, the subtle characterizations, gorgeous language, and vivid descriptions had me tearing up for days. You truly accomplished something remarkable. This is hands down one of the best written stories I have read, fanfiction or otherwise.
| SliverFlick chapter 17 . 3/15
Why do you keep repeating yourself? One word is more than enough.
"I push, push, push" sounds like something you'd get from a book called, Polly and her pocket house or something.
Other than that, I love this story!
| HannaHilarious chapter 20 . 3/4
This was so well-written and absolutely perfect!
Thank you for writing this!
| doodeedoo chapter 20 . 1/20
I liked :)
My favorite line, I think, "my head tilts, my world follows"
| doodeedoo chapter 19 . 1/17
Oh boy. Esme. I can't hate her,really. Her not being actually malicious and all, selfish at worst in putting her son above others. But damn, to be in Bella's shoes...
| doodeedoo chapter 17 . 1/11
I'm with Bella here. Her reasons for meaning it, they somehow sound right to me too. That it'd be right for them,too. And I feel good about her asserting it. Yeah, total feel-good chapter lol
| kerilou chapter 20 . 1/8
Thankyou for creating this amazing story.
I only wish I had read it as a wip reading all in one go nearly killed me I was an emotional wreck, tears and snot included it wasn't a pretty sight! Haha I suppose it's my own fault I was in the mood for angst and boy did I get it!
Thanks again, Keri xxx
| Andromeda8V chapter 20 . 1/7
Your words... complex... cerebral... Flowing like a poem or a river. I ached with her, it almost hurt to read but it was worth it, the best things are. Thank you!
| onlybelieved chapter 20 . 1/7
This was utterly, heartbreakingly beautiful. You write gorgeous words and while I found it hard to get started at first it was SO worth. One of the best and worst heartaches I've had in a long time. You're super talented and this needs to be recognised beyond the platform of ffnet.
(it was also one of the most tasteful lemons I've ever, EVER read.) So, SO, SOOOO good. Idek what to say anymore. This is perfect and I'm angry at myself for waiting so long to read it...
Thanks for sharing. Truly.
| SofiaB chapter 20 . 1/6
I absolutely was hooked reading this! So much angst (but who doesn't love angst?) and so beautifully written that I just couldn't stop reading! Just like Bella, I really wanted to hate Kate but I couldn't fully either, and I had been rooting for Jasper to be a friend to Bella... but then he had to ruin it by kissing her. :(
AND I was honestly gripping the edge of my seat (or bed as the case may be) as I read this final chapter- I didn't know what would happen, if they could finally work everything through or if they would end it. I'm so glad that they are working it through! YAY! lol.
Needless to say, I have LOVED reading this story and I have every intention of coming back some point in the future and rereading it!
I also want to ask, will you and sparrow be continuing the violet hour? I saw that story recc'd on the lemonade stand and I absolutely loved it, and its what led me to read this story (and now your other ones as well).
There were other things I wanted to mention but can't remember at the moment so I'll leave off as saying: I really really enjoyed this story. Thank you for writing and sharing! And now I'm off to read your other stories... :)
| KateyK chapter 20 . 12/31/2013
Thanks for a beautiful story.
| SiriuslyPink chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
I was about ready to cry for her during this chapter. I wonder why he's so distant. Did he find someone else and is cheating on her? If I had a husband and he cheated on me, I'd cheat on him right back. And then divorce his ass. But I hope Edward isn't cheating on her or even thinking about it because I have a hard time forgiving characters who betray.
| Vkosta chapter 20 . 12/23/2013
Amazing! I think all of us can relate to them at some point in our relationships. It shows just how important it is to talk to each other.
| Sayblegirl chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
First chapter in and I'm already hooked!
| kathac chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
Wow. First chapter and I'm hooked- luckily I have twenty or so chapters to go!