Reviews for Cracks in the Pavement
Courtstuffs chapter 4 . 1/10
JFC Bella is immature. I already hate these people. So much drama and bullshit could be avoided by communication but no, she’s choosing to make herself the pariah and wallow in self-pity
nothing2Me chapter 20 . 12/6/2023
This is one of my favorite stories. I always come back to reread from time to time. . Hurts my soul but written so beautifully
DarkDaughter30 chapter 1 . 6/18/2023
Jesus Christ
Guest chapter 18 . 2/19/2023
Jeez, how many more metaphors can you pile into that chapter?
The first quarter was nothing but.
Alice saying he never ever left her was pretty disingenuous, he left her night after night, even on her birthday, all by choice.

Your Edward is the epitome of hypocrisy.
Guest chapter 12 . 2/19/2023
He still can’t answer a fkg question. This is ridiculous.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/19/2023
Why can’t he just answer a fkg questions straightforwardly?
Paliia chapter 20 . 7/23/2022
Beautiful! Perfect! My kind of angst, though I'd love it if there was a little future take.
Maybe my puffy eyes in the middle of the day plus the strong headache I have after reading this are worth it lol imma go and take an ibuprofen pill now
Thank you for sharing!
blb1000 chapter 1 . 2/5/2022
They are in a sad place, for sure.
Senorfrogs chapter 20 . 1/23/2022
Suzy-Chapstick chapter 20 . 6/14/2021
I just reread this. I love it!
Monnie Mcintosh chapter 20 . 5/25/2021
Your story was brutal, I was exhausted just reading all the emotions that you so perfectly out in to words. You are amazing. You should write poetry . I loved it.
unhappyflowerchild chapter 20 . 5/24/2021
This hurt me so bad to read. I don’t think I ever stopped crying.
Pattigirl23 chapter 1 . 3/13/2021
So so sad and at the same time so good to read... So many feelings and pain... Thank you for sharing, you are a great writer!
Midnight Cougar chapter 20 . 2/16/2021
CitP has always been one of my all-time favourite fics, so I just did another reread . . . and it’s still so good! What an engaging story. Seriously one of the best fics I’ve read. Maybe someday you’ll do a futuretake? Lol Xo
clickpic chapter 20 . 1/8/2021
Thank you for your story. It was angsty as promised!
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