Reviews for Cracks in the Pavement
blb1000 chapter 1 . 2/5
They are in a sad place, for sure.
Senorfrogs chapter 20 . 1/23
Suzy-Chapstick chapter 20 . 6/14/2021
I just reread this. I love it!
Monnie Mcintosh chapter 20 . 5/25/2021
Your story was brutal, I was exhausted just reading all the emotions that you so perfectly out in to words. You are amazing. You should write poetry . I loved it.
unhappyflowerchild chapter 20 . 5/24/2021
This hurt me so bad to read. I don’t think I ever stopped crying.
Pattigirl23 chapter 1 . 3/13/2021
So so sad and at the same time so good to read... So many feelings and pain... Thank you for sharing, you are a great writer!
Midnight Cougar chapter 20 . 2/16/2021
CitP has always been one of my all-time favourite fics, so I just did another reread . . . and it’s still so good! What an engaging story. Seriously one of the best fics I’ve read. Maybe someday you’ll do a futuretake? Lol Xo
clickpic chapter 20 . 1/8/2021
Thank you for your story. It was angsty as promised!
clickpic chapter 17 . 1/8/2021
This was difficult to read and so sad.
Moonlight4me chapter 19 . 12/19/2020
This must be the most angst ridden story I ever read. It’s almost too much. But you have a beautiful way with words. Maybe the story hits to close to home for me.
mitzywan chapter 20 . 12/14/2020
Before I read this, I already knew it was going to be so full of angst, but I was not prepared for what I was getting myself into. I thought I prepared myself enough, but everytime I read and read more, it feels like something inside me just dies along with Bella and I felt her emptiness inside as if she's living inside me. That's what makes this fic beautifully painful. What I first noticed when I started reading this is how poetically beautiful this is written. No doubt you are an exceptional writer! You were able to convey their pain, hurt, and inner battles with such a way that it makes it raw and colorful. This is definitely one of the most painful fics that I've ever read, no doubt about that. I'm really glad that Edward and Bella made it work, because they just gravitate to each other. Their hearts already know what it wants, and they want each other, it just took a little while until they realized that. They just hurt and hurt and hurt until it becomes to much, but eventually, I think this is what made them be closer again. The pain just becomes to much until neither of them wants to feel it again, and the only way to rectify that is to be with each other again, to love each other again—although that love never did went away, it is settled and engraved in their hearts already, just waiting to re-emerge itself again. Reading this fic is a ride; a cathartic, painful, and beautiful ride. Thank you so much for this. xo
Elle Whitecap chapter 20 . 11/15/2020
Jesus that was intense. They really need therapy and they do need to get away from his toxic parents. This was tough to read in the most beautiful way.
FeministBellaSwan chapter 20 . 9/30/2020
Wow, I’ve read a lot of fanfic but this blew me away. I’ve never felt so much for these two, or rooted so hard. I cried right along with them. This is beautiful. Thank god it ended happily or I literally would have died. Thank you for this.
LolaTheSa chapter 14 . 8/12/2020
She literally WENT on a date with another dude and she doesn't see anything wrong with that? That's fucking crazy/
Rose chapter 20 . 5/16/2020
I know this was written long ago but this quarantine got me in the Twilight mood and this was amazing and heartbreakingly sad which is what made it so amazing
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