|Reviews for Public Displays of Affection|
| Reader chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
That was hot
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
Make a sequel please please please
| gennalindz chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
;) that was cute.
| Reviewer1234 chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
A really creative story. I certainly wasn't expecting the sweet, innocent Dawn to be leading this action, especially against (or should I say with) the bold, courageous Cynthia! Part 2 would be a nice addition!
| Cynthialover447 chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
Right a sequel 2 this
| Slightly Dead chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
...dominant!Dawn is something new. I definitely don't object.
| haylE15 chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
Nice and funny :3
I like! Thanks for posting it :)
| Ailoncha chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Those italics were delicious. You did a great job here.
| Espada Harribel chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
In hindsight and about a comment earlier, I think the italics helped add to the pacing quite nicely. It built upon the feverishness, the passion and the carnal instincts behind what they were doing in such a public place. I found it quite refreshing actually.
To me, I use italics to emphasize something purely intense. I think you did a fine job executing the actions depicted between to women. I certainly felt anxious as I read, primarily because of the notion of them getting caught. Fantastic short-smut.
Espada Gives This:
4 Out of 5 Shark Fins
| 101 chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
fanpairings fetishes and when dumped into fanfics it equals fap material.
| somerandomloser12231321 chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
Awww... Dawn would totally do this.
| bogey654 chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
This is hot, and very... Hot! So good!
| Thundercat1 chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
you should contiue this to when they go home.
| WolframZero chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
somany italics and bolds. lol great "story". Poor cynthia,so helpless.
| Holly of the Night chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
That... definitely surprised me 0_0
Dawn acts so... fiesty in this fanfic, and Cynthia so... desperate. I never would've guessed~
Kind of cute though, in a smut kind of way n_n