Reviews for Forgotten Ones
shining darkness dragon chapter 14 . 9/2/2011
not exactly what i would do with arana but i like what your doing any way about azimuth i forgot to say that he has a very strong instinct and if he needs to he will attemt a stunt that seems insane a first but ends up working a marical

-shining darkness dragon-
Pitbull chapter 14 . 9/1/2011
Not bad wait for it to continue
Phoenix Firewing chapter 14 . 8/2/2011
Really enjoying the story so far :)
Unholy Cypher chapter 14 . 7/30/2011
nice chapter. glad to see that its been updated again, nice to read an iteresting sotry for once. hope you get the reveiews and please give me the next chapter
The 5th Dragon Guardian chapter 14 . 7/20/2011
I hate cliffhangers!
X007 chapter 14 . 7/19/2011
Ohhh, poor Malefor. you can somehow bring his true story to be revealed.
The 5th Dragon Guardian chapter 12 . 7/13/2011
Good job!
The 5th Dragon Guardian chapter 11 . 7/5/2011
Good job and i really like this cahpter
The 5th Dragon Guardian chapter 10 . 7/3/2011
Good job so far! your one of my favorite authors and i like your stories alot. keep doing a good job and ill be waiting for the next cahpter. and also good job on the grammer and put in just a little more detail with the fights and stuff you know.
Shining Darkness Dragon chapter 7 . 6/9/2011
i've got anouther OC i'd like to submit if you're willing to accept it





realm:the one that Cain is from

apperence:long slender black body,hypnotic purple eyes, 8 long blood red horns that run back from the top and sides of her head, dark silver wing membranes, black underbelly.

powers/abilties: she has mastered the powers of darkness

personality:very intelegent, always gets her way in the end,is manipulative, is good at deciving and trickery, her favorite way of killing is inconspicuasly add *khanak pioson* to her enemys drink while they are asleep

** khanak pioson (not real) once swalowed its effect will activate any time within the next 24 hour symutaniously freezing every musle in a creatures body. note: not instanat death, victem may have up to 15 minutes to live after the effect warning: can only be cured by being removed by a dragon with contol over pioson (*cough* Cynder *cough*)

hope you like my antagonist

-shining darkness dragon-
Guest chapter 7 . 5/24/2011
i have noticed a pattern in your writeing, you will post 1 or 2 chaters then you wait about 2 months before posting another 1 or 2 chapters ussually you say it's from witer's bloke

so i did a little reserch on tip on how to help prevent writing bloke heres what i found

1:make sure you are getting a full 8 hour sleep

2:keep a healthy diet

3:excersize (you dont need to jion a gym or something but at lest get your hart pumping by like talking a walk or whatever)

4:develope a patern(for example at least 15 minutes a day, or 1 sentance each day or something)

5:keep a good work space

6:remember why you are writing

7:ignore any douters

8:set deadlines

9:listen to what your friend say have to say(they are your insperation)

10:lower your expectation

hope this help out

-shining darkness dragon-
The 5th Dragon Guardian chapter 6 . 5/1/2011
Nice work. Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm anxious to find out what happens next.

The Ice King
shining darkness dragon chapter 6 . 4/30/2011
forgot one thing and that is that i know spyro and he would never flip out like that he is quick to forgive
Shining Darkness Dragon chapter 6 . 4/30/2011
wow that was amazimng chapter and literaly words cannot discribe how awsome i think it was i loved all of it except for the fact that Azimuth has yet to show up but i know you will find a way to fit him in eventualy

-shining darkness dragon-
Phoenix Firewing chapter 4 . 4/8/2011
Nice chapter.

Don't worry about getting Serenity's personality wrong, you got her personality fine :)

Can't wait for the next chapter.
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