Reviews for The Lion King III The Prince's Trials
Starzinmieyez chapter 2 . 2/23/2011
I'm gonna go straight onto the next chapter!
Dotdog chapter 3 . 2/23/2011
Great chappie :D
Dotdog chapter 2 . 2/23/2011
Ohh. I want to know who shrieked! Good use of Zira, I really felt it was Zira-ry.
Starzinmieyez chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Uh-oh. Trouble is a brewing :S Update soon!
Dotdog chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Hi, I liked the wAy that the new maytriach was introduced and potrayed. She seems to have slot more to her that what seems.

For firsts chapters, that was great:) There are just a few things- when you say 'mate and brother' is the Banzai and Ed? I presumed so or did you not want us to know- or maybe it's some OC :D The other thing is that at the start I was a little confused about who was who for a while but it sorted itself out after a while, which was good. Another thing was that there were a few errors, but don't worry I do it all the time! :O maybe you consider a beta or something :)

I'm not picking bad things out, I'm just trying to be helpful if I came across picky or patronising I'm sorry ;D

I'm Definatly excited about the next chapter.