|Reviews for Who'll Stop the Rain?|
| XPoisonButterflyX chapter 2 . 6/19/2011
I have read both chapters of your story, and I must I say I love it. It is very detailed, and it seems to come from personal experience. I also enjoyed it because my father is a Marine, and he has told me about what bootcamp was like. The only thing I really saw were a few misspellings. Also, you should stay in one point of view. You jumped from present tense to past tense. All in all, it is very interesting and I do hope you continue to post more. :)
| New.York.Celt chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Woo Great job baby!
The sergent guy seems really scary and curses worse than I do!
Keep up teh good work babe!