Reviews for Zombie Paradise
Rika chapter 5 . 4/28/2016
A little out of character for Lightning here. Light is a soldier of few words. Seriously in the elevator scene, she will not stop and say "i'm going to go out there and save you guys" or "I'm sorry guys" or "I love you Serah, I love you everyone, goodbye". Lightning would never say those words, especially to a bunch of guys she just met.

If that was the in game Lightning, she would just have draw out her Blaze Fire Saber (in this case her axe) probably say "I love you,Serah."(but I guessing she won't knowing her) then go out slay those monsters (in this case zombies).

But nonetheless, minus the out of character parts, kinda good.
Erica chapter 5 . 8/8/2012
When fang sacrificed herself it reminded me of left 4 dead, actually most of the story did, Jihl being the Witch lol
1111010101010101010delete10100 chapter 8 . 8/6/2011
ah hell yeah! xD
BoundKiller chapter 8 . 8/6/2011
Oh shit a sequel
blackkat9666 chapter 6 . 7/9/2011
The fic's pretty good but there's room for improvement. Grammar would be one and the fact that you switch from "vanilla" and "Vanille" irritates me x_X But other than that, very creative.

It's not a bad comment at all, just constructive critisism along with compliments :)

Keep at it! You're doing well!
Castiel V2 1997 chapter 7 . 4/19/2011
Resi 5 ending lol! This is a very good story, I have to say. I've just started writing, but I know what's good.
1111010101010101010delete10100 chapter 7 . 3/28/2011
Gravenimage chapter 7 . 3/27/2011
I think it was a good ending are you making a sequel?
Super-Silent-K chapter 6 . 3/26/2011
Oh yay they made it out alive! But when you say an epilogue I wanna know what happens next! Update soon!
ShadowCub chapter 6 . 3/26/2011
I'm thinking someone is infected in the escaping group.
Gravenimage chapter 6 . 3/26/2011
How about making a sequel putting some elements from Resident Evil and pairing Lightning with someone an OC maybe.
Super-Silent-K chapter 5 . 3/24/2011
Aww bye Fang :( Nice chapter. Btw, Snow and Hope are not dead weight! In my opinion they are not.
1111010101010101010delete10100 chapter 5 . 3/22/2011
whoa that chapter was intence! poor fang...poor lightning thinks its her fault dude totaly cant waite for your next chapter! xD
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