|Reviews for Megaman Zero X: Humanus Machina|
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/27/2013
That was soooooooooo cute. do more
| eclipse2012 chapter 11 . 3/12/2013
Please update this! I've fallen in love with the storyline and I absolutely love this pairing! Please continue!
| PikadudeN64 chapter 11 . 11/7/2012
Awesome twist, dude! From Signas ordering the Alpha Squad to go on vacation, making Iris pregnent, to Zero taking Ciel to his hometown! IDK if there are any more chapters, but if there are, post them ASAP! :D
| Apathetic Nonsense chapter 11 . 9/3/2011
I really enjoy this story. It's very interesting that Zero used to be a human and that his twin brother is (not surprisingly) Omega. Keep it up :)
| Nyago chapter 11 . 8/17/2011
Interesting history and the way you protrail Zero family is...well unique! The idea of Zero with a family kinda still weird for me..LOL But it was still a cute chapter none the less plus the fact I adore Ciel/Zero fanfiction like hell no tomorrow. ;)
Looking forward to updates like normal!
| SubZeroChimera chapter 11 . 8/17/2011
Omega znd Zero in the same house? Well, that's gonna be a bit of a mess...
| Nyago chapter 10 . 8/10/2011
Awesome story, finally got to finish the chapter and looking forward to the next chapter :)
| Nyago chapter 9 . 7/26/2011
I enjoy myself hugely reading this chapter 1 to chapter 9, I simply love the interaction you create and the way everyone acts. Its interesting to see everything come together so nicely as if all the series was base on. (Actually megaman X-Zero series) I'm also a big fan of ZeroxCiel so keep up the awesome work, I looking forward to the next chapter! :)
| SweetestChick chapter 9 . 5/30/2011
Yay! Zero is back! Good thing Limine got the anti-virus. It was also really sweet that Zero corrects Ciel and clarified that he's her man and its his job to protect her. Did I influence you to write that line? Lol ;-)
Once again, great job! Can't wait for the big battle and the revealing of the Maverick leader.
| SweetestChick chapter 8 . 5/27/2011
Good going with the fic! Keep it up! I'm still baffled at how few reviews the story has... XD Well, you'll get my review whenever I read a new chap! Lookin forward to the next.
| SubZeroChimera chapter 8 . 5/25/2011
And the pot thickens! Er, plot, sorry.
| SweetestChick chapter 7 . 4/7/2011
Wow, I can't believe this fic has just 3 reviews? It deserves way more! Hmm... well I'm really diggin this story and I like the Zero/Ciel pairing. I'm not a big MM fan all, but I did watch the anime when I was younger if I happened to catch it. Thanx to my bf, I got curious about the series again...namely when he showed me a pic of Zero. I got kinda fangirly when I seen him and wanted to read a lil more about him (Ciel I def understand you falling for the guy-reploid or not lol). Always liked "interracial" pairings, namely when the fem char is human. Idk guess I have a thing for the whole 'male being stronger/the protector' idea.
Aight, sorry for my lengthy rambling I had to tell SOMEBODY my story about my recent MM interest *coughthanxtozerocough* I think Zero/Ciel is a cute pairing and it sux they couldn't be together...tragedy. Anyhoo great job! Luv your writing skills! Update soon! :)
| iris.receptor chapter 7 . 4/3/2011
I'd like to see more about Ciel's past even if she had another name before just like Zero. Maybe it would be Alouette or that she had a sister like Prairie but away from her. Iris/X? Well, theren't many about them, more like few. . . and very rare. Also I would like more about Axl and Pallete together. Oh and about the chapter. . . damn! Zero, you can't BECOME a maverick! YOU CAN'T!
oh, that's everything wait! I like this version more than the first one so I'll be waiting!
| a fan chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
I've been following this since the original and I can definitely see the improvements in writing in this new piece. The action is improved and there is lots more details.
Still Ｉ ｗａｎｔ ｔo say that I liked th old version better. Its just that you got a lot in writing now sure but you lost a lot of the personality you had in the old one. We got to learn a lot more about your characters and their thinking so the story flowed.
You know that's also the same thing about Lumine. Even though it was really obvious he wasn't up to anything good before, you didn't outright put it out there so there was still a chance we were all wrong. anyway, still looking forward to how you'll make this one work out.
| MungoJerry chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Watch your verb tenses. ;)