|Reviews for Things People Say|
| hondagirl chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
EFFIE. EFFIE. EFFIE MY LOVE.
I am here, literally at this episode at this moment in time. I just finished Empty Quiver last night and I am about to start Personal tonight when I get home after work. I have been very selective on my ff reading, just because so many stories that have been recced to me take place in S3 or S4 and I am not at that place right now (spoilers!) but more importantly, I don't know S3 and S4 Deeks and Kensi yet. I don't know them and their history and where they are so to see a Kensi that just trusts Deeks and vice versa is weird to me because I haven't got there on the show yet (but check back with me in 2 weeks, I'm determine to catch up by then!) But this story, is the Kensi and Deeks I know right now. There is trust and appreciated but there is also that guard between the two of them and Kensi struggling with how much to reveal to Deeks as he lies in his hospital bed (my poor shaggy haired bb!)
"But it proves beyond the shadow of unreasonable doubt that he is her blind spot, the one chain reaction she never saw coming."
Ohmygod, I love this line because it is so her and so them at this point in time. He truly is good for her, and her for him and that something neither one of them expected and that they are still figuring that emotion out. I love that you have her run through those things in her head and I hope I see something similar on the episode when I watch it tonight. Love this! Love you!
| F Maurice chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Very good, but I really would have liked to have heard what Kensi was about to whisper in Marty's ear.
| respectthemuses chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Your writing is so deep and descriptive. The war within her is so real, so intense. I love how you wrote Kensi here. My only issue with this story is that it wasn't continued. It shows so much potential for their relationship. I really wish you would revisit it. Just outstanding.
| Firefly1344 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
This was lovely.
| jmlane1966 chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
This is a nice insight into Kensi's character. The themes you touch on are interesting and compelling.
| WithAshlie chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Wow... So good.
I love the line "what event outside of a near death experience would motivate her to demolish the walls time and scars have built"... ah so much emotion :) So much truth in this, Kensi written in near perfection :)
And the line "She thinks back to all he's given and all she's never been quite prepared to take." wow!
Keep up the great writing and I'm sure I'll keep reading it :)
| anonkp chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Beautiful story. Would have loved to read a chapter 2 with what happened when he woke up, maybe told from his point of view. Anyway, really well written!
| Fictionista 48 chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Okay, so how I missed this is totally beyond me. And I apologize for it profusely. This was deep and beautiful and tangled and all the things that are them. Just so lovely, I'm nearly speechless. You touched on so many emotions and thoughts with so few words. Absolutely brilliant. Bravo.
| Carla Balsinha chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
This story,for me deserved a continuation,thats my opinion...I enjoyed a lot of this chapter!
In here we watched NCIS:Los Angeles at sundays afternoons.
| Loopylou chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Awesome story. Very nicely done. :)
| annaliesegrace chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Lovely, just a lovely fic. Please feel free to write more of them!
| Silver War chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Wooooow! Your writing is absolutely fantastic!
"So much of her job is duty wrapped in words; things people say. The boathouse is an unholy confessional that morphs beams of gentle sunshine into unrelenting and trained suspicion as it passes through slatted walls splintering from the truth and consequences it has seen."
While I was reading that first paragraph I was in awe. I would love to write like that.
Fantastic job :)
| Chianna chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Very touching and well written
| Bug-Eyes-Blue chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Great story. I liked how it wasn't romantic. Don't get me wrong, I would love it if those two got together, but it just seems unrealistic at the current moment in time.
You really captured Kensi's attitude, and even though this was done before personal you did a damn good job of guessing.
Thanks for the great story
| AliMac chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
So glad to see another fantastic writer join the fandom, especially a Kensi/Deeks fan! This was very well written and definitely in character. Thanks for writing and I hope you're planning on writing many more NCIS:LA fics!