Reviews for The Trip
vodkavamp76 chapter 28 . 4/30/2012
Arggggh, I want to punch that smug look right of James' face. Seriously the man is pond scum. I would love to see Edward put him right in his place. Please tell me that you will get Bella some kind of retribution for the way James has treated her and still seems to think it's OK to treat her?

Much love

Lou xx
pmw1234 chapter 28 . 4/29/2012
She should have called Jacob to come beat the shit out of him. You have to have Edward put him in his place at some point in the story. God he was just awful
staceleo chapter 28 . 4/29/2012
Aaaaahhhhh! You killed me with this chapter! It was pure greatness and I wanted to kick James's stupid head in. chapter soon? :0)
SMG.-.Marie chapter 28 . 4/29/2012
Good chapter! Please update soon! I hate cliffies!
bbp1 chapter 28 . 4/29/2012
What a fucking asshole James is. Proud of Bella ...hope Edwards call is positive!
twichris chapter 28 . 4/29/2012
please let it be that tayna is just trying to mess with them and break them up. update soon.
JRDurham chapter 28 . 4/29/2012
totally in the mob to hunt down and kick james' butt. i really want to believe that edward has seen the photo himself and is calling bella because he knows that she's seen it as well...or to warn her. i hope... :(

ugh ugh ugh...
alc1002 chapter 28 . 4/29/2012
Good chapter
Liz24 chapter 27 . 4/28/2012
I can review again!

** James!

He better not ruin her. I am going to hate him, I just know it.

Feel better!
Ami chapter 27 . 4/28/2012
James? WTF?

Sorry you're dealing with health issues. :-( How awful. Yea, of course I understand. Hope you feel better and not just because you stuck me with the biggest cliffe EVER. :-)
Ami chapter 26 . 4/28/2012
Wow. Huge step for Edward. :-) :-)

Love this story.
JaMarie chapter 27 . 4/28/2012
I just read though all the chapters that you have so far and really like this story. I have to say that I was surprised that James was at the door. I hope Bella kicks his ass for what he did to her in the past and for having the gall to show up again. I'm looking forward to the next update.
Midnight Cougar chapter 27 . 4/25/2012
I really enjoyed this chapter being just about her; you know, spending time with Jake, Rose, Jess & just Bella's inflections on her life & how she has gotten to where she is today. I really felt like she was "Tying Up Loose Ends."

The C. Ayden name was brilliant, very creative! And, like I said when I first got this chapter, you Cliffy Bitch! Damn James! I need the next chapter. xx I adore you. :)
JRDurham chapter 27 . 4/23/2012
i loved the cliffie! james...*shakes head.

i really hope he doesn't destroy her self-esteem or worse answer her phone! my mind is spinning all kinds of horrible scenarios!
sieniusia chapter 27 . 4/23/2012
Cliffie was cruel! You're pure evil and if you don't update soon I'll have anxiety attack:)

It was really nice to read about Bella, that is secure in her relationship (besides texts - but old habitd die hard). I'm-not-pretty-and-interesting-enough-Bella is usually for me a dealbraker, but I couldn't resist your story.

Get well soon!
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