Reviews for The Trip
Midnight Cougar chapter 4 . 4/11/2011
There's a few things I want to say about this chapter: #1)I am really enjoying the relationship b/w Jess & Bella; I find it very refreshing & #2)That BJ reference-exchange b/w Anthony & Bella is priceless - I LMAO everytime I read it! I smiled & laughed so many times while editing & reading this chapter. Great work darlin'. So proud of you! 3 MC
Midnight Cougar chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
I love this line, "A sexy Adams Apple!". It makes me smile. You have the most creative, sexy mind. ;-) xo MC
bzwifenmom24-7 chapter 4 . 4/10/2011
Anthony Cullen could actually make a woman spontaneously ovulate, with just one look. lol
Midnight Cougar chapter 2 . 3/6/2011
Thank you for your "fantabulous" thank you, but the pleasure is all mine, I assure you. I'm so proud of you TJE, this chapter flows very well & provides so much insight into the plot, each character's persona & impending storyline. Oh Edward, this is so EXCITING, can't wait for ch3! :-)
elisabeth2me chapter 2 . 3/6/2011
I love your story so far, it's written very well, I think.

I can't wait for the next chapter :p
Midnight Cougar chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
I loved this first chapter, Renee is so endearing. Your storyline drew me in & makes me want to read more; as I know that Bella & Rose are ready to embark on "The Trip" of a lifetime. Thank you for sharing this experience with me, my dear friend. I am proud to be your "unofficial" Beta b/c I know that this is going to be an amazing story. 3 MC
staceleo chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
This story is going to be so much fun! Bella and her pizza made me smile. You are a wonderful writer and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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