Reviews for Little Lights
Burai Stelar chapter 5 . 2/7/2014
Goodness, it's been a while. A loooong while, since I read anything of yours. Honestly, I'm not sure if you remember me, we beta'd for each other a few years back (not that it matters), but I'm jealous. Your writing is still soo much better than mine! The concept is solid, the content is wonderful, and the humor in this is still funny!
Honestly, on your profile you've said that your writing has improved, I immediately was like 'What?!' You're so good, and the fact that you say you've gotten better just blows my mind. Blows it straight out of the water.
At any rate, now that I'm practically re-hooked onto your stories again, I'm just waiting to see if you bring anything to the table. But it's okay if you don't.
livelaughlove87878 chapter 5 . 11/25/2012
Please update this soon!
Mad Matt15 chapter 5 . 10/2/2012
Great job I like how u put alice and lilo in cant wait for ur next update :)
Wash in with WAVES chapter 5 . 6/22/2012
your story is so unique. french roxas is so amazingly awesome, i cant fathom it haha. :D
reijiyamato chapter 5 . 5/2/2012
cant wait for the next chapter xxxx
MonkeyGirlxoxo chapter 5 . 4/18/2012
So, I just read this story and I adore it!

The story is so original, and the characters are so nicely created! You didn't stick to usual character molds, and I really like it. :) Having Roxas speak french was a nice touch. :P

Also, the families you put together in this story are adorable. I love Marluxia. :P

As for your writing, it's spectacular! I really enjoy reading this, it's amusing and very detailed. :)

Can't wait to see where this story is headed. :) I'll be sure to review your next update.
pohkeemawn chapter 5 . 4/17/2012
This story is amazing! I love it! I love Roxas and his French. . I can't wait to read the next chapter!
xglitter-gloss chapter 5 . 4/17/2012
ahhh the thought of a French Roxas... :3

your story is amazing, btw. Why didn't I see this sooner? update soon, please!
Polymoly chapter 5 . 4/13/2012
You finally update! *dances happily*

This chapter is definitely worth the wait. I'm SO happy that you finally hinted more on Roxas and Namine 3 They are just too cute on this chapter xD

My favorite line would probably be:

"Roxas, did you just pull the move?"

LOLOL! Poor Roxas got caught xDD

Your writing is still hilarious as ever and it was definitely entertaining for me to read more on your story.

Update soon! You know I'll be waiting ;)

P.S: Put more Frenchy accent on Roxas. He sounds absolutely hot even though I only imagine him saying that in my own head lol.
Misoso chapter 5 . 4/13/2012
YOU'RE ALIVE! OMG SO HAPPY!

I was really worried and I almost had a heart attack when I saw this update.

Awesome as usual! I really love the Disney references.

Roxas is just too cute and I like the hints if his feelings. Oh the 'move'. Lol. I laughed at how Nami just watched him in amusement.

Soo excited for whats to come! Don't overwork yourself, I can imagine how hectic final year is. Good luck! Looking forward to your updates
Caramelized chapter 5 . 4/12/2012
first off...

I'M SO SORRY, OHMYGOD. I KEPT LAYING OFF EDITING YOUR STORIES I COMPLETELY ABANDONED YOU D:. Terrible beta status right hurr :c.

I did have a chance to read it... but I never got around to editing.

I'm so sorryyyyy again D:.

Chaotic things have been happening in my life with colleges and such, DON'T BE AFRAID TO EMAIL ME... I MIGHT FORGET TOO... WHICH IS A HUGE MY B...

wah.

But I loved how this turned out! Haha, precious Roxas. Real cute thurr :).

There are just a few minor french errors, nothing hugeee; just masculine/feminine things that google translate won't do

(i.e. Ma cherie for a girl, mon amie for a friend-girl}

I don't really understand the part where you typed "It was implied, s'il vous plait"

maybs google translate butchered it a bit?

But whatever had you stuck on this chapter, you got through it and it turned out lovely :D.

I'm super sorry again :(! Senior year never seems to end... I promise I'll get started on RB as soon as this week is over!

-Caramel (xLychee)
furubasuta chapter 4 . 4/7/2012
MIAH WILL YOU HURRY UP AND UPDATE THIS BEFORE I EGG YOUR HOUSE, I NEED MORE OF YOUR ROKUNAMI FLUFF!
Mad Matt15 chapter 3 . 3/28/2012
Great job but is the next chapter really the last one I hope not pls keep going
Mad Matt15 chapter 2 . 3/5/2012
Good story i like it 2 bad it's almost over
Trubeque chapter 4 . 2/2/2012
Must...resist...ball in the face joke...
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