Reviews for Wondering |
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![]() ![]() Oh my god so I know this is a more than a decade late but I'm just getting back into Danny Phantom to relive the nostalgia and friend recc'd this to me. It was absolutely breathtaking. I sobbed through a good bit of it and everything was just perfect. Thank you so so so much for writing 333333 |
![]() ![]() I cannot begin to explain how amazing this story was. Your writing and the style you used, the dialog, and way you delivered the details demonstrated your talent. I keep wanting to return to my “favorite parts”, but can’t choose them because the entire story was captivating. Your story stands on its own, even to someone who hadn’t seen much of Danny Phantom before. You were able to draw this 24-year-old in and make her feel connected to each character. THAT is what I look for in a good author. I’m sure your writing skills have only improved since when you wrote this and hope you continue to write. Honestly, my body is still shaking from the emotions invoked from your story, allowing me to feel as Danny felt. Only a good story will do that. You could have changed all of the characters names and I would likely have felt just as enthralled by this story. I may sound redundant, but I am so glad that I came across your story. You can be sure that I will be reading it again and again. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() hey not for nothing but this was one of the most intense scenes I've ever read in fiction. like... at all, ever. I was literally trembling. the pacing/tension was air tight. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic is simultaneously so good and so painful that I have tried to read it four separate times in the past and never succeeded. I always ended up putting it down because it gets too depressing… angst has never been to my taste, but this fic was so well-done that I couldn’t resist reading it. Well, today I finally succeeded. On my fifth attempt I read all the way through (and skipped a class to do so). And I have to say, it’s amazing. Glad it has a happy ending (or as happy an ending as one can hope for given everything that happened in it). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woop woop answers yay! I hope he doesn't die tho... Pls heal my mind does not want to witness the die! Guess I just gotta keep reading, huh. Good story thus far! |
![]() ![]() NICEEEE! also i wish he disowned his parents, which would've been hella satisfying but then again, Danny might not have the heart to do that RIP loved this |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was one of my favorite fanfics when i first read it years ago, and during quarantine i’ve been rereading a lot of the fics from my favorites list so i reread it and holy crap. i forgot why i actually loved it so much, just that i did, and rereading it i remember. this is so good like i wish i could give you specifics but i don’t even know what makes it so amazing it’s just beautiful. (also i took a peek at your other stories on here and recognized some that i read on ao3 more recently after i stopped using this website so much a few years ago and i love all of them too so like you’re an amazing writer all around is what i’m trying to say) thanks for writing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() VLAAAAAAAAD! VLAD NO! Stop hurting him! VLAD YES! Help him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I know this has been years ago, I don’t even know if you’re still on the site. I just found this when I got into a Danny Phantom nostalgia phase, and this is just so good I mean it’s so hard to read, because it’s so sad but it’s just so well written. I mean it’s amazing thank you for writing this! I am now going to go onto your profile, and read all the other stories you've written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Think you could write a short? Like Amity Park’s reaction to Phantom being back and stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wtf i am almost half way through the chapter vlad should not have siad what happened to him he should have just said you were in an accident daniel...but i get it i guess danny was gonna figure it out anyway soooo goood i love it i cant wait to see the ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay maybe it's just me but i feel really bad for his parents. i get this is danny pov that's why we dont get sympathy but they really didnt KNOW. as horrible as it is and now the feel like failures as parents |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn danny it just tellin everyone...this better have anhappy ending *fingers crossed* also i could come up with a few excuses BUT that last line hit soooo hard i love it "phantom's dead" |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read a lot of gruesome things, but some scenes in here really take the cake. It was well written, but if it was me in Danny's situation I would have been long gone. Poor guy. Thanks for writing this, it was a wild emotional ride! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for writing this it was awesome I loved how in the beginning Danny’s thoughts are kind of jumbled and disconnected because that does make sense. A ptsd victim would be confused and disorientated and then his thoughts slowly get clearer and more focused. Still confused and hurt but more logical. It was perfect |