Reviews for The Beginning
deangirl515 chapter 1 . 2/17
please continue! (:
Emily K chapter 1 . 2/9
Update! I love how its going! Keep it up!
GHuedst chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
So good! Please continue writing it! :D
serina1944 chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
NOOOOOOOO! THIS IS AMAZING AND ITS ONLY GOT ONE CHAPTER! :'''''( PLEASE UPDATE IT AGAIN! I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER!

I love how cocky and hot jake is! ;)

This is an awesome story already and I really like it!
DreamBigandBeUnique chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
You should totally finish this stpry pleeeaase! I'll love you forever please?! Oh and you should also make another story of an oc and oneof the twins i will LOVE you if you do pleeeeeeaaaaaasssseee?! :D tis is a great story! Byee! :D
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
i loved it! can't wait for more!
Annika Sparks chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
please continue with this story. please i like it alot and there isn't many aliens in the attic stories. please
Bailey chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Oh, please, please, please continue! I love this story already and I really want to know what she does!
AngelOfAnime97 chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
OMG ! O.O I love this XD you seriously got to update as soon as possible. :)
chrnarnia3 chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Please finish this? It's amazing!
Ellie chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Dude,continue this!it's awesome!
nevergonnadie chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
hey! PLZ CONTINUE THIS STORY!
HelloBetty chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
and you have not updated since then why?
MistoffelessTrekyManiac chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
I WANT MORE! PLEEEEAAAASSSSSSSE!
blackangel150 chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Hahaha
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