Reviews for His First Family
MissKingLawliet chapter 1 . 9/24/2019
Ow, my heart...Jet...Darling -hugs him and hugs Albert too-

Heartbreaking and beautiful. I've had a crush on Jet since I was 15, and I've always had a soft spot for Albert. I love this. Amazing work. :)
Tebolizer chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
Cyborg 009 is my childhood anime. I started rewatching it a few days ago, but finished reading the manga much earlier.
Jet is my favorite character. So is Albert and Joe.
Thank you so much for making this fanfic

I was too lazy to log in, but my fanfic account is also named Tebolizer, in case you wanna reply through a pm :")
DayDreamer9 chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
I love it.

Just absolutely love it.
EMarie55Plus chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Poor Albert and Jet! I wanted to cry myself when I read this. These two have always been my favorites, and I loved how you brought out their feelings. Great job!
Yami Dragoness of Dark chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
-hugs 002- it's okay Jet! Albert won't do something stupid like that again, no one is going anywhere.

Wonderful job, 002 never really does show a lot of weaknesses (or tries not to) but you can always tell he really cares for the group and growing up without any family and in New York, he wouldn't have know a lot of love or what it means to be a family. Lossing someone would suck. It's easy to be worried about someone when they're hurt, it's not always easy to forgive them for getting hurt or yourself for not protecting them. I think it's time for a group hug!

002/004/008: NO!

Me: D: awww.

001/003/005/006/007/009: Sure.

Me: Yay :D
Gothic Tigress chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Not nice! You made me sniffle and my eyes tear!

That was touching and well written.
Aseptic chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
I was just checking out your profile and I came across this. What a little gem! You've written something that is genuinely brilliant, with fascinating in-character introspection on 004 and 002's behalf. I really enjoyed reading this, it flowed nicely and got me emotive. Lovely work - really. :D
Kaiya's Watergarden chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
great story i think you should expand on it
WestAero13 chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
TTwTT That was...beautiful!

You know how to spoil a person don't ya! That was such an awesome story, like are you going to write more 002-or-004-angsty-brotherly-love-friendship-non-yaoi stories! that would be awesome! XD
SuoSopuli28 chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
A very touching story and I like the fact that it has 002 and 004 portraited in a very non-yaoi/shounen-ai way. Thanks for that. You captured Jet's emotional turmoil very well and realistically, I can tell, I've lived trough a loss of a close person and it really is much like you described here. I like this piece as it is, pure and simple, it doesn't need to be continued, at least in my opinion that is, but thank you nonetheless for this piece, it made me cry, remembering my own losses, but in a good way and I feel relieved.
TigerTerror chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
This is a fantastic little piece you've written. The emotion comes through very potently, and both character's react to each other perfectly. I like the concept too, it fits so well with the characters and the series that it seems quite real.