|Reviews for Beneath the Skin|
| Cookie Heist chapter 3 . 10/27/2012
First of all, you've succeeded in making me really nostalgic for Japanese baths, so thanks for that.
Second of all, you got the characters' voices down great as far as I can tell. Awesome! I liked this.
One question though: I understood all the Japanese but I'm wondering though, why use so much of it in an English-language story?
| PsychoIdiotLady chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
amazing! you kept the personalities operfect, and you got their backstories right!
| Damaged Ghost of an Angel chapter 3 . 11/28/2009
Ha. That was cute. I liked it! Thanks for writing!
Best line: “Fuck no. Dunk his half-blind ass.”
| Hn.Fool chapter 3 . 6/1/2009
This story is awesome. I always feel more respect for the author when they write angst without resorting to romance. I'm not a yaoi fan. I think it's unacceptable when you have such great characters to play off of and you chicken out and make them make out instead. So, Kudos to you. Great job! ) Hn.
| virtual-asshole chapter 3 . 8/1/2008
i loved it. it's very beautifully written and so sincere. theres no ther way to describe it.
| EveryDayPerson chapter 3 . 2/28/2008
Wow. I couldn't stop until I finished the whole story. I love the trading scars scene. Sanzo's talk about not giving into the easy part was so poignant and fitting. How do you write like that? :) Loved it!
| Mako-clb chapter 3 . 9/16/2007
Not what I expected, but I really enjoyed reading it.
| I Know Your Name chapter 3 . 11/7/2006
I liked this one. Excellent.
| Sibilant Whisper chapter 3 . 4/14/2006
lmao, my most favorite line was: Fuck no, dunk his half blind ass.
Cracked me the hell up XD
I love the point behind this one and you ended it nicely, with some closure and didn't leave us neccessarily needing more XD awesome job.
| The Great White Emu chapter 3 . 3/14/2006
wow, nice fic. personally i think you pegged Sanzo and Gojyo's personality. woot!
| Alleonh chapter 3 . 3/6/2006
| bscl43 chapter 3 . 12/9/2005
fucking good shit
| Pg-chan chapter 3 . 12/3/2005
They talk a bit more than is usual; kinda plain-spoken, very much just putting things out there. But it's all true. And it doesn't shout. I just love this fic. Like a hot bath, it's really very relaxing.
| narrizan chapter 3 . 5/17/2005
after writing a few...i'm sorry for not being original, but know this..i like your writing it's style, its propensity to convey thoughts and feelings and your characters just come to life. so if i say nice a hundred times...just know that i like.
| TERESA chapter 3 . 2/20/2005
I don't know how to 'critique'. All I can do is give you my humble opinion: I liked it very much. There were parts of it that made me so sad. And isnt' that what good story telling is about: to make the reader feel the emotions behind it? The emotional pain you put the characters thru was done very well. Thank you for this fic.