Reviews for Beneath the Skin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() An introspective work on the 3 of them, which is surprisingly interesting and well thought out. Good on you~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() First of all, you've succeeded in making me really nostalgic for Japanese baths, so thanks for that. Second of all, you got the characters' voices down great as far as I can tell. Awesome! I liked this. One question though: I understood all the Japanese but I'm wondering though, why use so much of it in an English-language story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing! you kept the personalities operfect, and you got their backstories right! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha. That was cute. I liked it! Thanks for writing! Best line: “Fuck no. Dunk his half-blind ass.” |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is awesome. I always feel more respect for the author when they write angst without resorting to romance. I'm not a yaoi fan. I think it's unacceptable when you have such great characters to play off of and you chicken out and make them make out instead. So, Kudos to you. Great job! ) Hn. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved it. it's very beautifully written and so sincere. theres no ther way to describe it. |
![]() ![]() Wow. I couldn't stop until I finished the whole story. I love the trading scars scene. Sanzo's talk about not giving into the easy part was so poignant and fitting. How do you write like that? :) Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not what I expected, but I really enjoyed reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this one. Excellent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmao, my most favorite line was: Fuck no, dunk his half blind ass. Cracked me the hell up XD I love the point behind this one and you ended it nicely, with some closure and didn't leave us neccessarily needing more XD awesome job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, nice fic. personally i think you pegged Sanzo and Gojyo's personality. woot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That...was beautiful... |
![]() ![]() ![]() fucking good shit |
![]() ![]() They talk a bit more than is usual; kinda plain-spoken, very much just putting things out there. But it's all true. And it doesn't shout. I just love this fic. Like a hot bath, it's really very relaxing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() after writing a few...i'm sorry for not being original, but know this..i like your writing it's style, its propensity to convey thoughts and feelings and your characters just come to life. so if i say nice a hundred times...just know that i like. |