|Reviews for Superman : The Man of Steel, Vol 1 Origins|
| Arcadia Sterling chapter 11 . 8/20/2015
So I found your Superman Vol2 story and decided to go read this first one and well... Well...
I know by this time the story is four years old and there’s probably no chance that you’d go back and rewrite it, but...
Could I strongly encourage you to consider it?
The thing is, this is a Superman origin story and doubly meant to be the opening remarks of your own DC fanfic verse and... It just kind of flops. It doesn’t really do the job it’s suppsed to do and largely because it all goes by so quickly. Superman shows up in chapter six and by chapter nine he’s fully and one hundred percent accepted as a superhero and a good guy without anything significant happening in between? Mind-reading aside, what helped J’onn figure out that Superman was good? How did he convince the rest of the police of the same thing?
The story raises a lot more questions than it actually answers. As both an origin story and a foundation for the Justice League, it doesn’t work the way it should. I can give you a full break-down in a PM, if you’d like.
| Miles Montgomery chapter 11 . 5/17/2013
Very interesting. A few grammar and spelling issues here and there but a nice story. As to answer another reviewer's question on why Clark Kent is always a reporter, the author of this story did not elaborate on that, but me being a Superman fan for about 28 years, he is a reporter because it allows him to hear news from around the world first hand so he can act quicker and be able to help out wherever necessary. But not bad. I liked how you elaborated on his childhood some. Something most author's don't cover. Considering it was his childhood that made him the man he is today. Going to check out the Bat now.
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/31/2012
That isn't the original justice league.
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/31/2012
| MarvelHero1610 chapter 8 . 9/30/2011
Nice addition. The chapter was rather short though and
i wish you would expand a bit and describe with more detail, but nice job regardless.
| Kairan1979 chapter 3 . 3/1/2011
So, you claimed this story was AU. I hope I'll see the differences in the Superman's backstory (for example, why Superman is always a reporter, give him different job).