Reviews for The Apple Orchard
VanessaJJ chapter 10 . 3/13/2015
It's a great story thanks for sharing
Th 1998 chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
it sucks
MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 2 . 3/1/2011
amazing chap

i really wanna give emmett a hug right now

Go Esme!

lov esme soo much and she's amazing and yet she barely gets mentioned in the books not even her human life was talked about in S.M'f four long as books urgh so not fair

my rant aside ur fic is soo good

what the heck did emmett do?

i really cnt picturing him doing anything bad.., unless killing royce the 2nd or sumthing like that anywho i cnt wait to read more plz update soon!

little miss fashionista chapter 2 . 3/1/2011
i actually kinda of like this :) keep wrting dont stop it it toally differemnt from other stories.. and im guessing the blond stupid/idiot was my dear jasper ( love him hehe) ahh :)

ps... this is my new fav story :)
MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
i lov this chap

ur fics reallly good

somehow i just LOVE the idea of emmett being a teacher, a stern teacher at the most lol and them two being brother and sis so cute

at first i thought alice's bro was edward but now since i know it emmett im supr happy

um what do they want with Alice?

anyway are they jewish or something

sorry for the long review but i really cnt wait to see where u take this

luv it

that kiwi chick chapter 2 . 3/1/2011
Your story sounds good so far. :)
bookbabes chapter 2 . 3/1/2011
Dont speak German, so I couldnt correct you. This is a very well done story though. I am very much looking forward to more soon!