Reviews for What Could Have Happened
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2016
This is why I love fan fiction. You get to experience things you wish you could see on the show. I love Gibbs reaction to the thought of Tony being poisoned. I love your writing so much. I admire you.
VG LittleBear chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
Hi, I never thought that Tony was in danger of ricin poisoning, watching the show or later, but I enjoyed your scenario very much! Thanks and cheers!
Msedward chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
I love Obsession and how Tony reacts to Dana and I certainly loved your fic. I always thought Gibbs should have done more talking or something at the end of the episode and this was similar to the reactions of Gibbs that I imagined them. I loved the place where Gibbs asks "If I tell you to strip, you're going to take it the wrong way, aren't you?". That was quite funny.
Athena13 chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
This was a really nice story. I'd love to see this actually happen on the show!
Laura-trekkie chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Great little story showing just how much they all care about each other. I liked that Tony was looking out for Gibbs just as much as Gibbs was looking out for Tony and how Ducky knew he was reassuring them both, even though Tony deflected a lot of Gibbs' concern away.
BellaHickenbottom chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
How the Hell did I never notice you had written a story I didnt read? I feel blind now lol. Even though you said it wasnt slash and I know it wasnt, my mind went there anyway lol. So glad to see Gibbs really does care and would be completely beside himself if something really bad ever happened to Tony again! This story was great and I'm glad I found it...even if I am late to the party lol
gosgirl chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
I like it when you're attacked by plot bunnies coz this is a winner. Liked it enormously and you brought out the strong friendship between them. Superb dialogue, coming across as equals. Love the way they are so in tune with each other's moods. Loved the line 'If I tell you to strip, you're going to take it the wrong way, aren't you?' and I loved Gibbs starting to look Tony over almost as a way of just DOING something... inactivity never sitting well with either of them. And this line was very moving, "Yeah, if it was bad news, you would be." and SO Tony to be doing everything he could to diffuse the situation, having Gibbs' six, and *sniffle* for when Tony wanted Gibbs with him in the bathroom, and the near apology and the hug and the light head slap.
dnachemlia chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Interesting. Not a fan of the episode, but you did bring up a worthy plot point.

And now the image of Gibbs watching Monty Python has me giggling ;)
Sparkiebunny chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Super in-character and a great tag to the episode. Loved Gibbs's concern, and how Tony didn't fight it. Awesome work, Kester! :)
Dixie Dewdrop chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
What a sweet, sweet story! Thank you-
Kitty Black Cat chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Oh I loved this! I really, really LOVED this! It's a super great post-obsession fic. I love how super worried Gibbs is over Tony. It's so sweet. I just think this fic was absolutely wonderful! Thanks!
mary2000 chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Did Gibbs care for Tony more then Boss and ageant to go to Tony's to make sure that heis OK? I Love you Gibbs and Tony stories very much. Keep up the good work written them!
Rose Malmaison chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
I love the way writers pick up a small scene or comment and create a whole story out of the air. This is really interesting and I felt for Tony. I'd have been freaking! Wonderful that he wanted Gibbs to be there during the examination just in case. Great understated and genuine story about caring.
sterno chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
charli911 chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
what a great little story... and a tag I haven't seen mentioned before...but you're right, it is possible that the KGB lady got him while he was at that bookstore...nice job
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