|Reviews for Revelations and Expectations|
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/22/2021
Screw rules of jurisdiction; these kidnappers are messing with the wrong people.
Beam John to the Deadulus and then send down an assault team. After the bad guys are all subdued you can beam him back and call in the cops. Is a judge (or anyone) going to believe it if the bad guys swear that their hostage disappeared into thin air before they could threaten to kill him to force the SWAT teams to stand down?
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/21/2021
I suspect that if Julia really knew how good at martial arts Teyla is she would want to let her punish Ian personally... hell I expect that she could sell tickets. Every woman who has ever had to work with the sh*t-head would probably pay good money to watch Teyla beat the crap out of him.
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/14/2021
I understand Dave's reaction but if they needed information out of any suspects or prisoners they ought to have just let Teal'c interrogate them... his prisoners practically beg to tell him everything they know.
| Guest chapter 17 . 11/12/2021
Good to have extra security to keep reporters away from David's house, I hate to think what Ronon would do to them. Although come to think of it John would probably enjoy hunting them with a Zat-gun.
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/11/2021
Maybe I am paranoid but I expect that the Russian reporter actually works for one of the more elite branches of Russian intelligence, however that is probably a good thing as long as all he does is observe and report back to his superiors. The Russian government is more likely to believe one of their own trusted agents than a random reporter.
| Guest chapter 21 . 10/31/2021
If Colonel Armstrong continues to object then send him back to earth with a scathing assessment of his inability to improvise and adapt to local conditions. Armstrong might be an excellent combat commander but he is clearly a piss-poor commander for an isolated but critical base where improvisation, flexibility, a willingness to think outside the box, and do whatever it takes to get the job done are far more important than adhering to the regulations.
| Studio62 chapter 21 . 10/23/2021
Just had an absolutely wonderful reread of this epic fic! It makes me long so much for the season 6 we never had where apparently John and Teyla were supposed to see the future and get it smacked into their heads that they belonged together. Sigh. At least we have this wonderful work by you! It is so touching to read about John and Torren together 3 I look forward to getting started on the many sequels. Really great writing and characterization throughout.
| sheppardlover928 chapter 20 . 6/23/2021
Finally! I must say youre description of the passion, physically and emotionally were spot on! Loved the wedding and reception—love how you had them say goodbye to Dave and Julia too!
| sheppardlover928 chapter 19 . 6/23/2021
Lol! Love that last bit ! Poor John and Teyla dont get very far before being interrupted —ever! So glad you let John pass his physical with no hitches, after the wedding—onto Atlantis!
| sheppardlover928 chapter 17 . 6/22/2021
Poor Rodney—so clueless! Back to the reveal—terrible that the SGC would let the footage of John being fed on go public on national tv and around the world! Sure glad John has Teyla there to help him ! And his team too, though for not much longer...
| sheppardlover928 chapter 16 . 6/22/2021
Hmmm...Seems the cat is out of the bag, as the saying goes! But what will be the repercussions?! I think John will run for the hills (Atlantis) before he becomes a celebrity dogged by paparazzi! He is so not going to like the attention! And how will Dave handle it? How will the people ofmEarth handle knowing the truth?!
| sheppardlover928 chapter 15 . 6/22/2021
| sheppardlover928 chapter 13 . 6/22/2021
The gangs allthere—except TJ—which is sad—but John and Teyla need some time alone to become a couple—c’mon John—get a move on!
| sheppardlover928 chapter 11 . 6/22/2021
Teyla and Torren just have to go back—-or John just needs to get his legs moving—pronto! All three eed to be together!
Love the movie night scene on Atlantis! You are very good at the characterizations of everyone in fact, i havent said how much your writing is so excellent that As I read, I can see it all played out in my head so clearly—especially the emotions!
| sheppardlover928 chapter 10 . 6/22/2021
Sniff...boy!— you are a master at heart-wrenching scenes! Sniff, sniff...