|Reviews for Revelations and Expectations|
| Biannca chapter 1 . 6/30
I read the full book and let me say that it is a damn good book. You worked hard on it and let me say that you did good.
| Irene34 chapter 21 . 5/27
Amazing, thank you very much
| Moi chapter 21 . 3/28
WHAT an amazing story! The only bit I would have wished for would have been some kind of explanation/reaction by the SGC/IOA how they could have dared to allow Sheppard's torture by Kolya to be broadcasted without either his consent or even without giving him at least a heads up. It's inexcusable and they should have known that it's one thing to be tortured and the people you work with getting to watch a recording of the events. However, it's quite a different thing if a traumatic event like that makes it into a TV broadcast, an international one at that, especially when there's no doubt about the identity of the victim. Those prisoners a few years back in that Iraqi prison that were humiliated and tortured by American soldiers at least had been granted the decency of remaining largely anonymous when the media got their hands on the story. Sheppard himself wasn't even given that much, not even a warning.
Anyway, great work!
| Brightbear chapter 21 . 2/10
A good, entertaining read. Not sure John would tell anybody about Atlantis before the formal announcement but the welcome back to Atlantis was perfect. Only John could worry people hadn't missed him when they were obviously so desperate to have him back!
Torren was adorable and acted just right for his age. I'm not usually a John/Teyla shipper but you made it work for me. Happy that by the end everyone was where they belong:D
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/8
This story was one of the best SGA stories I have read in a long time, thank you for sharing. I loved how John was able to reconnect with his earth family & how he was with TJ & Teyla
| KallistaStorm chapter 2 . 9/5/2015
I love the scene with Teyla helping John get his emotions under control.
| Terry Kay chapter 21 . 7/6/2015
That was an epic work of art! Thank you!
| Irina Marenco chapter 21 . 3/31/2015
Wonderful story, I always wanted to see more of John's interaction with his family. Your take on Dave is very well thought and beautifully written. Thanks for sharing!
| Irina Marenco chapter 11 . 3/31/2015
Loved this chapter.
| Irina Marenco chapter 10 . 3/31/2015
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| mkoepp63026 chapter 4 . 3/14/2015
Oh jeez, this is the 2nd time i have read this and I am still crying my eyes out.
| sleephead chapter 21 . 3/13/2015
I loved this story. I like the way you make John more human by adding the back story of his family.
| lynne1432 chapter 21 . 3/8/2015
This was awesome. On to the next story.
| mkoepp63026 chapter 21 . 2/9/2015
OK, I love this 's perfect! The perfect John/Teyla love story but also the exact story for John to come to terms with everything he's done. And the ending was just right for everything. I think I cried with almost every chapter but it was great! Thanks for this story
| Hunter1544 chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
Just wanted to leave a note. This story and all its Sequals are AWEOSOME! Well written in all aspects!