|Reviews for Beginnings|
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/1/2015
You! How could you abandon such a perfect story!
| Neverland45 chapter 10 . 4/19/2014
Didn't bother to log in...
Anyways I REALLY love this. I hope you continue! You write really well and the story and plot is good.
| Little Kunai chapter 3 . 1/29/2014
cat toys? why don't these people just move?
| HyruleHearts1123 chapter 10 . 10/23/2013
O.o Damn girl! You need to continue this, or BEN will haunt you for all eternity!
| shilo mochaisin chapter 10 . 7/3/2013
continue. NOW. please?
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/9/2013
I love the idea of Ben actually being Jad's brother and Jad having forgotten. IMHO, I think the real Jadusable wouldn't make them brothers but it makes a little bit of sense. After all, OOC!Jad announced that BEN was "roughly" Jad's age (21) and this story provides an idea as to why BEN chose Jad of all people.
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/23/2013
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/23/2013
I guess the last half of this chap is to show that the husband isn't that devoted to the cult. Both the parents aren't but the 2nd person view just makes it clear that one of them won't break and tell from the pressure of keeping such a secret from such a powerful leader.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Love the disclaimer.
The story just immediately talks about the Moon Children. Just great -.-
I find the Moon Children stuff just so dark
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/22/2013
So Ben woke up in Majora's mask?
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/20/2013
'scribbled "Majora" across the front of the cartridge'
starts letting out small squeals of sheer happiness
starts gulping for air
| NoName chapter 9 . 3/20/2013
Oooh, snap! *snaps fingers*
Awesomefic is very awesome.
Love this. This maybe has actually happened in the story
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Best Prologue Ever.
| someone chapter 10 . 3/7/2013
BEST WAY TO END EVER