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| Twilight Writing Contest chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Note: It seemed a little rushed and could maybe use a little more grammar fixes and detail.
Suggestion: Continue it? Like make it go on and become a darker story. That could be cool. :)
Like: Well, I don't like in Twilight how Bella is all like "I love Jacob too" so I like this. :)
| Christina96 chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
awwwe so sweet i still think she should right hooked him lol
| madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Yep that's much closer! Nice one.
| xXxhurting-insidexXx chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Heyy, Chikas! I Thought That That Was Soo cute! Lolz, i Am Soo Tempted To Read Your Other Story, But I Won't..Don't forget To Read All meh Stories! Love You!
| Team Edward Rules All chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Yeah that's how it should have gone. Check out my team Edward stories. They are very anti Jacob. Good job!
| ByeFanFiction2015 chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
AMEN TO THAT! THAT WOULD HAVE GOTTEN RID OF ALL THE PISSY DRAMA BTWN BELLA AND JACOB!